POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Innocent Until Proven Guilty!"When I dabble at things.....
37 total reviews
Comment from fictionwriter
wow, that's potent. Not only are the words a shocker, so's the picture. I can't imagine being in those shoes. Great job again.
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wow, that's potent. Not only are the words a shocker, so's the picture. I can't imagine being in those shoes. Great job again.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Joy
The two suited each other perfectly. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well poem you have penned for the contest. The art work you chose went well with it also. Good luck my friend. Hugs, Teri
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This is a very well poem you have penned for the contest. The art work you chose went well with it also. Good luck my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Teri
Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. I have never tried it so I gave it a shot. Smiles, Carol
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Comment from Phil Kitom
Well done Carol, a very descriptive
poem that together with the artwork
you have selected provides a powerful
and clear message...
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Well done Carol, a very descriptive
poem that together with the artwork
you have selected provides a powerful
and clear message...
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Phil
Glad you enjoyed it. I had never tried this type of poetry before but the picture just screamed for a poem. We have had 13 people on death row found innocent with new DNA...really scary. Smiles, Carol
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Carol, this is a good presentation and an impact poem. I don't know anything much about all the syllable counts. Me still apprentice. I must get back to poetry in December.
Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
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Hi Carol, this is a good presentation and an impact poem. I don't know anything much about all the syllable counts. Me still apprentice. I must get back to poetry in December.
Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Jada
Thanks for stopping by and giving me a review. aprreciate it. Carol
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Carol ....
Under a most appropriate picture, what you have written not only complies with the requirements for this format but also forms a well-worded caption.
There is nothing to suggest changing. As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Carol ....
Under a most appropriate picture, what you have written not only complies with the requirements for this format but also forms a well-worded caption.
There is nothing to suggest changing. As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Nanette
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my poem Appreciate it very much. Carol
Comment from Amfunny
This is an excellent entry, my friend. Love the artwork you chose for it also. I think this one will be hard to beat. Very well done.
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This is an excellent entry, my friend. Love the artwork you chose for it also. I think this one will be hard to beat. Very well done.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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amfunny
Thanks so much for the kind review. I really appreciate your comments. Carol
Comment from missy98writer
Begin Again,
Your Lune poem "Innocent Until Proven Guilty!" for the Lune poetry writing prompt. The art work is powerful. The Lune seems like a bigger challenge than a Haiku or Senryu. With 13 syllables your poem says so much. I like this one of the Lune's I've read. Good luck on the Lune poem writing prompt. This is a five star Lune poem.
Thanks for sharing this deep poem.
Melissa.
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Begin Again,
Your Lune poem "Innocent Until Proven Guilty!" for the Lune poetry writing prompt. The art work is powerful. The Lune seems like a bigger challenge than a Haiku or Senryu. With 13 syllables your poem says so much. I like this one of the Lune's I've read. Good luck on the Lune poem writing prompt. This is a five star Lune poem.
Thanks for sharing this deep poem.
Melissa.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Melissa
In our state over 13 people on death row were found innocent thru DNA,,,there is something seriously flawed with a system that convicts innocent people. Carol
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I agree. Maybe DNA isn't as reliable due to human error on those CSI's who examine the evidence. Take OKC's coroner office lab, the superviors is in trouble because we have the worst crime lab in America. There are many infractions and error made by a sloppy CSI work.
Melissa.
Comment from adewpearl
What a great pairing of art and poem - this is my first encounter with the lune form, but you appear to have nailed it. You convey effectively what it must be like to deal with unjust accusations and having to live with society's misguided judgment. Brooke
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What a great pairing of art and poem - this is my first encounter with the lune form, but you appear to have nailed it. You convey effectively what it must be like to deal with unjust accusations and having to live with society's misguided judgment. Brooke
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Brooke
I had never heard of the lune either...just thought I'd jump in and try it. Not like the ones you write of course. I'll stick with the small fish in the sea. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Queenise
I liked this cute poem and can see the message that you are conveying so clearly. A very poignant statement that is so true even though it is not always the true case. I like this form. The art work is amazing. Blessings. Would recommend. Queenise
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I liked this cute poem and can see the message that you are conveying so clearly. A very poignant statement that is so true even though it is not always the true case. I like this form. The art work is amazing. Blessings. Would recommend. Queenise
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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Queenise
We have had 13 people found innocent on death row after new DNA..sometimes I thin prosecutors try to hard to make a name for themselves. Carol
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That is a shame. We sure don't live in a fair world. Thank God that He is just. Blessings. Queenise
Comment from fastdigits
A nicely crafted poem on a
subject that is forever topical.
Only those who have this befall
them know of the cries in the
wilderness where only the deaf
listen.
Your words in three lines say
so much in such a loud voice
that even the deaf are listening.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2009
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A nicely crafted poem on a
subject that is forever topical.
Only those who have this befall
them know of the cries in the
wilderness where only the deaf
listen.
Your words in three lines say
so much in such a loud voice
that even the deaf are listening.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
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fastdigits
We have had 13 people on death row found innocent from DNA. Something is wrong with our system. Carol