POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Goblins On Parade!"When I dabble at things.....
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I like your approach to this contest with the trick or treat theme well done a creative contest entry good luck regards Fuller
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I like your approach to this contest with the trick or treat theme well done a creative contest entry good luck regards Fuller
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Fuller
Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it very much. Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
I miss living where the trick or treaters come. Living in the country does have it's draw backs. They all go to the subdivisions. :( Loved the poem.
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I miss living where the trick or treaters come. Living in the country does have it's draw backs. They all go to the subdivisions. :( Loved the poem.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Joy
Yes, my parents live in the country and they don't even bother anymore. No body comes out there. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I like your septolet poem. It describes Halloween night very well. That is an adorable picture you used with it.
I hope the children have a moonlit night this year that inn't too cold.
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I like your septolet poem. It describes Halloween night very well. That is an adorable picture you used with it.
I hope the children have a moonlit night this year that inn't too cold.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Beth
I do too! It's always nicer when the little ones are freezing or getting rained on. thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Carol ....
What a delightful picture you have at the top and your few words are most appropriate.
There is nothing to suggest changing and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Hullo Carol ....
What a delightful picture you have at the top and your few words are most appropriate.
There is nothing to suggest changing and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Nanette
Glad you enjoyed the little goblins! Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from missy98writer
You're getting an excellent five star rating with this type of poetry. I've see this type of poetry before, but I've never tried it myself. I'm giving you five stars for an excellent poem for the prompt. Septuplet Poem writing. Thanks for writing this type of poetry and doing a great job.. . missy98writer.
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You're getting an excellent five star rating with this type of poetry. I've see this type of poetry before, but I've never tried it myself. I'm giving you five stars for an excellent poem for the prompt. Septuplet Poem writing. Thanks for writing this type of poetry and doing a great job.. . missy98writer.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Missy
Thanks for the great review. Glad you enjoyed it.
smiles, Carol
Comment from misscookie
First are these you're babies they are beautiful I really don't have any thing to say about your poem except it's cute and funny.
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First are these you're babies they are beautiful I really don't have any thing to say about your poem except it's cute and funny.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Cookie
Those belong to fan story art but the poem was written for my grandchildren. Thanks so much. Carol
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wow that something . I learn something new every day.
Comment from Sasha
I am the last person on the planet that should be allowed to review poems. Being dyslexic is bad enough, but trying to figure out all the complicated and complex rules to all the different poems literally brings on a seizure. So I usually ignore the rules and just review on content and how the poem makes me feel. I thought this was delightful and brought a smile to my face. You conveyed the feeling of the adult greeting the children beautifully and brought back some great memories for me. Very nice work and a great entry for the contest to (I actually counted all 14 words). I wish you all the best.
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I am the last person on the planet that should be allowed to review poems. Being dyslexic is bad enough, but trying to figure out all the complicated and complex rules to all the different poems literally brings on a seizure. So I usually ignore the rules and just review on content and how the poem makes me feel. I thought this was delightful and brought a smile to my face. You conveyed the feeling of the adult greeting the children beautifully and brought back some great memories for me. Very nice work and a great entry for the contest to (I actually counted all 14 words). I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Sash
If it brought a smile to your face and you enjoyed it...who cares about the rules. I just wrote it because it was fun. Everyone else has serious and deep thoughts...me...I am delighted with my grand children and Halloween. Thanks for the review....Carol
Comment from jadapenn
So dang cute. I can just see these little ones squealing with delight when you open the door and feign fright. I loved the presentation and the poem. I think you mastered the task well.
Best wishes for the contest, my friend. luv jada
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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So dang cute. I can just see these little ones squealing with delight when you open the door and feign fright. I loved the presentation and the poem. I think you mastered the task well.
Best wishes for the contest, my friend. luv jada
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Jada
I have never done one of these so I didn't even know if I was doing it right. But I thought it was cute. I am glad you agreed! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Blue Danube
Begin Again:
"Trick or treat...don't smell my feet?" I just love this and will keep it in mind for future reference.
"Goblins on Parade" is a delightful septolet which I find to be both atmospheric to that night and also funny. To the point of being right there in the moment.
Blue
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Begin Again:
"Trick or treat...don't smell my feet?" I just love this and will keep it in mind for future reference.
"Goblins on Parade" is a delightful septolet which I find to be both atmospheric to that night and also funny. To the point of being right there in the moment.
Blue
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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Blue
Thank you so much. You really made me smile. I have never done one and wasn't sure it was right. Glad you liked it! Carol
Comment from RebelRose
Well, this poem is just as cute as the photo attached.
You did a great job in keeping with the writing prompt. The imagery is good ... I can just see the little ones laughing with glee when they think they have frightened you.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Well, this poem is just as cute as the photo attached.
You did a great job in keeping with the writing prompt. The imagery is good ... I can just see the little ones laughing with glee when they think they have frightened you.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
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RebelRose
I love to do that with my grandchildren so I thought it was perfect. Thanks so much for the review. Carol