Comment from Mitzi

Excellent

Gotta give you a 5 for this one...if only for the joy and glee you bring to it. But actually, you got some good rhyming, fun repetitions and a silly '50s sounding jingle reminiscent of Rock Around the Clock. Very sassy. mitzi

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009

Mitzi

I thought of Rock Around The Clock too....Sassy...yeah...I like to be sassy...Thanks for enjoying and for the kind review. Sending a smile your way... :) Carol

Comment from LYLE

Excellent

Begin Again,

I am glad that at the end you explained that this was not
your idea of a girl's night out with a scrub and a rub.
If it were, I would recommend that one of the girls get help for you...quickly! Of course, you did include the wine, which gave me hope for your future,

Fondly, Lyle

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009

Lyle

Scrubbing and rubbing in the tub is just find with me but it wouldn't be a GIRL'S NIGHT OUT ... and the bubbles would have to be the Asti. Probably would have had to set the music to something like It Takes Two To Tango. Maybe next time.

Thanks for the review. Sending a smile to you. :) Carol

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

Dear Begin Again,
I don't deny your right to a "girls' night out", but I feel sorry that all you can look forward to is some activity driven by "obsessive compulsive behaviour". Maybe a couple of guys could help bring some light to your life....Not me. I'm too old I'm afraid. LOL and all that.
By the way, it's quite a cute poem and nicely written.
Regards
Reg

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009

Reg

I just had a birthday with numbers that I once considered ancient...so let's not talk about old. Besides, the fun of being a writer is how wild and crazy you can get and not a single joint will hurt in the morning. LOL Smiling at you, Carol

Comment from Gary D. Hardy

Excellent

Well I think you did a great job with this upbeat gem. I enjoyed reading it very much. It made me smile. Thank you for sharing.-------------Gary

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009

Gary

Thanks so much for stopping by and reading my silly song. Glad you could smile at it. Take care and have a great day. Carol

reply by Gary D. Hardy on 26-Sep-2009

You are very welcome. Good day to you as well.---------Gary

Comment from pilarblue

Excellent

I really enjoyed your fun little poem. Thanks for the smile and moment of a little happiness. This is very cute. :D Smiles -Pilar

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009

Pilar

Certainly not anything like the beautiful poems you write, but then it wasn't meant to be either. Just a silly poem to make us all laugh. Thanks for the kind comments. Carol

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I love it. Cute and adorable and had be choking on my popcorn.

I thought I would die at this stanza.

Sorry Phil, John and Charlie
Michael, Jim, and Steven
A girl's night out is what this is
So you guys will be leavin'

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009

Barbara

I liked the guys section of the poem too...Did you see I had you writing us a story (make it wild though...I know you can do it). Have a great day! Carol

Comment from debskatz

Excellent

Hey!

A really cute & joyful silly little poem! It certainly brought a smile to my face & I'm sure to everyone who's read it. Thanks so much!!

smiles,

deb

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009

Deb

Hurrah! If you are smiling then so am I. Have a great day! Carol

Comment from Marathonwriter

Excellent

Hi Begin Again,
Thanks for giving me a good laugh. I seriously needed it after the last poem I read. It was about abortions and stem cell research LOL. I love the writers on this site and this was a wonderful, well-written tribute.
Love,
Chris

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009

Chris

Hurrah...If you laughed and smiled, the silly song did its job. We all need to stop and do that once in awhile. Life gets way to serious. Smiles to you Carol

Comment from elainec4

Excellent

Begin Again,
You did put a smile on my face--and maybe a song in my heart! It was light, and it was silly--just what we girls need from time to time. Thanks for spreading the fun. elaine

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Elaine

I am so pleased that you enjoyed the silly song. We all need to lighten up sometimes. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

I loved this silly little poem. I don't like to rub,scrub or polish. But I do know some who just live to do this exact thing. A really fun piece.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

I really didn't have work in mind when I wrote the little silly poem...A metaphor for getting rid of all the sorrow, meanness, etc....I don't want to scrub, rub or polish either!! Thanks for the review. Carol