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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Buried At Sea"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
38 total reviews
Comment from Ankh
Wow....this is very good. It is a catchy story from start to finish with no unnecessary trappings. Well written and a very good idea. Thank you for sharing this.
Seth
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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Wow....this is very good. It is a catchy story from start to finish with no unnecessary trappings. Well written and a very good idea. Thank you for sharing this.
Seth
Comment Written 23-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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Ankh
Thanks for stopping by and reading my story. Appreciate the comments. Carol
Comment from FredCollingwood
I just read one about being burried in snow, why not one about being burried at sea. Very good job with a difficult writers' prompt.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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I just read one about being burried in snow, why not one about being burried at sea. Very good job with a difficult writers' prompt.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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Fred
Only things...worthless things...were buried at see though. She road off into the sunrise for a fresh new beginning. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again, you did a wonderful job. I hate the idea of men cheating on their wives, but it's more than on their wives, it's their kids too. Of course, you never said anything about kids, but there had to be kids.... Loved it.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Once again, you did a wonderful job. I hate the idea of men cheating on their wives, but it's more than on their wives, it's their kids too. Of course, you never said anything about kids, but there had to be kids.... Loved it.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Babara
He got everything he deserved...smashed against the rocks! Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
Oh yes. As only the women know how to do, get back at the bastard, and leave him with the bills for all of it. Well done with this piece.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Oh yes. As only the women know how to do, get back at the bastard, and leave him with the bills for all of it. Well done with this piece.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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fictionwriter
He deserved what he got and then some...Thanks for the kind review. Carol
Comment from Jnetgame
You certainly came up with an interesting story with the required words. I like your descriptions of the scenes. I can picture all the objects tumbling into the water. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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You certainly came up with an interesting story with the required words. I like your descriptions of the scenes. I can picture all the objects tumbling into the water. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Jnetgame
Just a touch of fireworks to rain on his parade. He deserved to lose everything. Thanks for the great review. Carol
Comment from hfriscia
A interesting read, I have to say, I like the romance it permits and sudden change in the story. Some I quite understand, but I it's the contest.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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A interesting read, I have to say, I like the romance it permits and sudden change in the story. Some I quite understand, but I it's the contest.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Thanks for reading and reviewing . Appreciate it very much.
Carol
Comment from Amfunny
Very nicely done. Wow. I enjoyed reading this. My mind is not working today so I am passing on this contest. Good luck in it. Very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Very nicely done. Wow. I enjoyed reading this. My mind is not working today so I am passing on this contest. Good luck in it. Very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Amfunny
There is no way that clever little mind of yours could stop working. Your humor just must have gone into overdrive and you can't catch up at the moment. Sounds better, right? Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Begin Again ....
This is a cleverly written story, leaving much to the imagination of the reader and with such a surprise ending.
There is nothing to suggest changing and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Hullo Begin Again ....
This is a cleverly written story, leaving much to the imagination of the reader and with such a surprise ending.
There is nothing to suggest changing and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Nanette
Thanks for reading and enjoying. Appreciate the review. Carol
Comment from SherryHo
You have done very well with the guidelines and the list of words. Your story is provocative and entertaining. I do like your stories on getting back. :) This is well written, with no SPAG that I could find. Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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You have done very well with the guidelines and the list of words. Your story is provocative and entertaining. I do like your stories on getting back. :) This is well written, with no SPAG that I could find. Good luck!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Sherry
Must be a bit of vengeance lurking deep inside of me...These stories just seem to happen. Thanks for enjoying my writing. Carol
Comment from Blaidd Drwg
Love the way you allude to the way the jerk treated his wife. Love that he ended on the rocks along with his golf clubs and books. Although I woulda been tempted to keep the porche:)
John
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Love the way you allude to the way the jerk treated his wife. Love that he ended on the rocks along with his golf clubs and books. Although I woulda been tempted to keep the porche:)
John
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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John
Thanks for putting a smile on my face...I am so glad you enjoyed the story. Carol
