Comment from laurelp

Excellent

Very well done. I didn't realize it was a movie set until I read the word "cut". Always a good sign when you get involved deep enough not to see what is approaching.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2009

Thanks for the positive review.

Comment from Juliette Chamberlain

Excellent

This is an excellent take on writing a story in 100 words.
You paint a very realistic picture of Cecelia's predicament,and describe her feelings too. I was relieved at the little twist at the end of the tale.

Juliette

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2009

Thanks for the positive review.

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

Ou-- this is brilliantly crafted. You have left the reader in the state of "which is it?", is it a darkly deceptive write which could reflect "snuff" movie making or is it only a scene from the latest high drama flick being filmed. Oh goodness, I'm sitting here smiling and shaking my head, so you've done a fine job with in the 100 word limit. No nits from this reader. Lora

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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Thanks for the positive review.

Comment from wierdgrace

Excellent

A great one hundred word dash, this is a great contest, and with just that many words, your dialogue, and your character is awesome, like a script, the director it is a wrap. I know that one. good luck.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2009

Thanks for the positive review.

Comment from Shirley B

Excellent

Great job. I was so into the water toture and was feeling sorry for the woman. I did not see that ending coming at all. You got me! Good job. Good luck in the contest. Happy writing. Shirley

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2009

Thanks for the positive review.

Comment from Donovan

Excellent

Very good. I think you have done well. Short...precise and all the elements...I think Dick Cheney should be the start in this Twilight Zone story.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2009

Thanks for the positive review.

Comment from Josipher32

Excellent

Hey, this was a great piece of flash fiction. It contained all the necessary criteria and the twist at the end was unexpected. You should do very well in this contest.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2009

Thanks for the positive review.

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

I heard myself saying"Aha!" at the end of your story. Very well written, eliz, full of suspense. I think you have done a great job in this 100 word dash flash fiction contest.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2009

Thanks for the positive review.

Comment from Sally Carter

Excellent

I am new to flash fiction, but thought this was a great read. I never saw the ending coming amd thought you built the suspense remarkably well. And of course, you met the brief. I didn't spot any typos, and I really wish you well in the contest. This must surely be a strong contender.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009

Thank you for the positive review.

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Excellent entry into the contest. You have used your allotted words wisely and effectively. A great little story that gained my interest and kept it till the end. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles, Susanne

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009

Thanks for the positive review.