Comment from colin

Excellent

Well if you don't ask you'll never know,will you?
But in asking one should be careful, because you just might get what you're asking for!Good look too them I say.
Your words make it all seem so easy,if you only ask!
I enjoyed reading your poem,a good entry for the prompt competition,good luck;peace Colin.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Colin...Eyes are deceiving...My alter ego wrote that 2 liner, because I know it couldn't have been me. Thanks for the review. I greatly appreciate it. Have fun! Carol

reply by colin on 23-Jul-2009

Carol I am new at writing and understanding poetry. I din't fully read the writing prompt you'd entered,and just read your poem for the words written.
Now understanding its meaning ,I give you my vote because you simply asked!! Good luck;
peace be with you...Colin.

reply by colin on 23-Jul-2009

Carol I am new at writing and understanding poetry. I din't fully read the writing prompt you'd entered,and just read your poem for the words written.
Now understanding its meaning ,I give you my vote because you simply asked!! Good luck;
peace be with you...Colin.

reply by colin on 23-Jul-2009

Carol I am new at writing and understanding poetry. I din't fully read the writing prompt you'd entered,and just read your poem for the words written.
Now understanding its meaning ,I give you my vote because you simply asked!! Good luck;
peace be with you...Colin.

reply by colin on 23-Jul-2009

Carol I am new at writing and understanding poetry. I din't fully read the writing prompt you'd entered,and just read your poem for the words written.
Now understanding its meaning ,I give you my vote because you simply asked!! Good luck;
peace be with you...Colin.

Comment from Mariea

Excellent

You couldn't have met the criteria for the "2 line suck-up" better. U should do well in the contest with this one. Regards Mia

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Mariea.. Thank you for your kind and generous words. I greatly appreciate them. Thanks again Carol

Comment from JessicaAshley

Excellent

Ha Ha, nicely done, Begin Again! I really enjoyed this. It said a lot for being so short. You're right, it is the naughty way to win! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

JessicaAshley...I think some one else wrote this and used my name because it doesn't sound like something I would normally say. Oh well, in the name of fun! Thanks for the kind review. Hope your are smiling. Carol

Comment from Kristia

Excellent

Hi,

Well this should get people's attention! This must be Vegas! I like the angle you have approached this piece with, it should do well. Nice writing as usual! Cheers

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Kristia...I think my alter ego wrote this because it sure doesn't sound like me. Thanks for the review and the nice comments. Carol

Comment from allinmyhead

Excellent

I'm not sure your offer is exactly what was meant by the biblical 'ask and ye shall receive', but I'll bet it will get more takers.
Very amusing. Money & sex ought to cover all bases.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

allinmyhead.. This must have been written by my alter ego because it sure doesn't sound like me. Thanks for the review. Hope it made you smile. Carol

Comment from Healing

Excellent

Well done. Very simple yet very catching. It seems everyone likes those subjects. You have nailed the writing prompt. I will most definately vote for this.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Healing..Totally out of character, but what the heck...jump off the deep end every so often for fun. Thanks again Carol

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Carol..How clever!
Money and sex will probably get you almost anything.

Ask! You shall receive,
Money, sex, whatever you need

Works for me! Good luck
in the contest
blessings....chey

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Chey

Thanks for the kind review. This was totally out of my character. I have no idea where my mind was last night when I typed it. Oh well...everything in jest. Thanks again Carol

Comment from Arlecchino

Excellent

ha, very nice. this will catch peoples attention and im sure secure there vote. What i need is my living room painting, dont suppose that comes under the Ask! You shall receive moto? ha, i like this, well done

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Arlecchino...You never can tell what it means, but first you have to find me...and I hide quite well. Thanks for the review. Appreciate you stopping by. Carol

Comment from Thesis

Excellent

Okay, you got my vote, LOL. Now, what to choose, hmmm?

I liked your lines. They would surely intice a vote. Well done in good humor. - Thesis

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Thesis...You have to try anything these days to try and get a vote. Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate the review and the vote!!!! Thanks again Carol

Comment from DrCarter2001

Excellent

Haha okay, very well done for the contest. Can you send me about 50 FS dollars and we'll call it even?
Short and simple, good job.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Dr Carter... That only works after I win and then you have to catch up to me. Thanks for the review. I appreciated it very much. Carol