Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Mastery
Talk about gettin one's heartbeat up in just 100 words you did it with your entry for the contest
Clear and what a terrifying vivid scene
I say the best to you in this contest
Gert

 Comment Written 18-May-2009

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reply by the author on 18-May-2009

Well, thankyou, Gert...I am very trusting of your opnions, as you know...Bob

reply by Gert sherwood on 18-May-2009

You are so welcome Bob.
I appreciate you rcomment.

Question did you read my posting "Time for a Rest"
Gert

reply by the author on 18-May-2009

No, but I shall, Gert, as I willany other that you take particular pride in...Bob

reply by Gert sherwood on 18-May-2009

Thank you Bob
Please take care.
Gert

Comment from Diversion

Excellent

Good job. I too have entered and found all my descriptive words on the cutting room floor. This is very skillful in a small package.

 Comment Written 18-May-2009

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reply by the author on 18-May-2009

Thanks so much, Diversion....I look forward to seeing your work, also...Bob (Mastery)

reply by the author on 18-May-2009

Thanks so much, Diversion....I look forward to seeing your work, also...Bob (Mastery)

Comment from Ronni

Exceptional

OMG Bob, this shocker/thriller conveyed in this "100 Word
Dash" writing prompt; recoiled in the senses as if it
had been struck by a cattle-prod! And within 100 words
you had us witness to the surest evil in the world; a
wretched killer in the midst of his dastardly deed.
Phenomenal job here Bob; with such searing descriptions,
smoke faintly still lingers about! The master at his
best here...Mastery indeed. Good luck in contest.

 Comment Written 18-May-2009

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reply by the author on 18-May-2009

Wow! What a wonderful review, Ronni...So glad you liked my mischief and mayhem...LOL..You are a sweetheart...Bob

Comment from Reesha

Excellent

Huh.
Despite the fact that this has word restrictions on it, I think you did a good job pulling it off.
Though I do wish the words "Insomnia is better" were somewhere in the actual piece. It would add a lot to it.

 Comment Written 18-May-2009

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reply by the author on 18-May-2009

Thanks so much, Reesha. I wish I had room for it..I tried, believe me..LOL...Great review and rating, thanks...Bob

Comment from Wild Flower

Excellent

Yikes! I hope he didn't tell his wife that doozy of a dream. Wonderful job using just a few words to bring the story to life. I think you did an excellent job.

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 Comment Written 18-May-2009

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reply by the author on 18-May-2009

Thanks so much, Wildflower...I will watch for your work also..Have a good day...Bob (Mastery).

reply by the author on 18-May-2009

Thanks so much, Wildflower...I will watch for your work also..Have a good day...Bob (Mastery).

Comment from joan marie

Excellent

At least it happened in a dream. Great entry. This is an interesting contest. I have found, being new to short stories it isn't that easy the less words you have to work with. Good luck, great story, joan marie

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 Comment Written 18-May-2009

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reply by the author on 18-May-2009

Thanks, Joan. I want you to know that I am one writer who sincerely appreciates reviews, both good and bad comments alike...Bob (Mastery)