Comment from chaswriter

Excellent

Helvi2 - Welcome back and I hope your computer problems are all behind you. I enjoyed the poem filled with beautiful imagery of angels and their powers. Well done. Charlie

 Comment Written 10-May-2009

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reply by the author on 10-May-2009

HI Charlie, Thanks! I hope my computer problems are behind me too. I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem. Helvi

Comment from Nanette Mary

Excellent

Hullo Helvi ...

This is a delightful poem with good rhyming and rhythm and colourful descriptions which provide your readers with plenty of vivid imagery.
There is nothing to suggest changing and your idea of this being the first in a series on the same theme sounds like a good one to me.
Thank you for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed it.
with love from ...... Nanette Mary.

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 Comment Written 10-May-2009

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reply by the author on 10-May-2009

HI Nanette, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, especially the imagery. Whatever I write about I want to create something that's soothing, happy,or with beautuful scenic views. Knowing you like what I did blesses my heart. Thank you so much! Blessings for yours, Helvi

Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

This is a really lovely poem, it flowed so well and the rthythme is wonderful. Sorry to hear your computer was giving you trouble. Hope you had a nice Mother's Day.

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 Comment Written 10-May-2009