CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from adewpearl
You tell your most humorous story in excellent nonet form. And I got the whole story from the poem itself without the aid of the notes. Talk about a moment of parental embarrassment :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2009
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You tell your most humorous story in excellent nonet form. And I got the whole story from the poem itself without the aid of the notes. Talk about a moment of parental embarrassment :-) Brooke
Comment Written 21-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2009
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Little boys....what's a mother to do?! HA! He was such a sweetie (and still is). At least he knows he is one of not too many in the world who has slid down a banister in the White House. HA! Thanks for your review, Brooke. Always appreciated. Sue
Comment from pasinger
well done for meeting the criteria.
A great memory, and lets face it if the white house children or even adults got half a chance they would do the same thing.
great read
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well done for meeting the criteria.
A great memory, and lets face it if the white house children or even adults got half a chance they would do the same thing.
great read
Comment Written 21-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2009
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I'm sure many kids have done the same thing! I saw on the news yesterday that the Bush daughters told Obama's daughters to have a great time in the house and included "slide down the stair bannisters" - That's what made me think of this for my nonet story. Thanks for the very kind review! Sue
Comment from joan marie
Boy I bet you had a fit. Secret Service men running around all over. I hope you weren't too hard on the poor little boy. Great read. Been promoting some older work before fanlist if you care to read off the available read list or my portfolio. joan marie
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Boy I bet you had a fit. Secret Service men running around all over. I hope you weren't too hard on the poor little boy. Great read. Been promoting some older work before fanlist if you care to read off the available read list or my portfolio. joan marie
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2009
Comment from AbigailDavid
Hello, cute story, and as a mother of a small tribe, I know how kids have a knack for doing and saying embarrassing things when you least expect it, and never want it.
Best of luck with the competition, it is a work i enjoyed reading, abigail
p.s. are you American citizens now? I am an Aussie!!
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Hello, cute story, and as a mother of a small tribe, I know how kids have a knack for doing and saying embarrassing things when you least expect it, and never want it.
Best of luck with the competition, it is a work i enjoyed reading, abigail
p.s. are you American citizens now? I am an Aussie!!
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2009
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AbigailDavid, thank you for your review. Only a question: A 4 star means work is needed. Can you please state where it needs to be re-worked? I'm American and we lived in Brisbane. Most of us live here in the states now. Ryan is now 29 and lives in Seattle. Thank you. Sue