CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello my friend,
Yes I must admit that France is a beautiful country. I spent sometime there and enjoyed the history. Beautiful tribute to Paris my friend... Dreamdancer
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Hello my friend,
Yes I must admit that France is a beautiful country. I spent sometime there and enjoyed the history. Beautiful tribute to Paris my friend... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Dreamdance, I love history, also. One of the biggest reasons I travel. And Paris (as well as France) is, of course, steeped in it. Thanks so much for your review. So glad you enjoyed it. (Have you ever been to Rome?) ....Cheers, Sue
Comment from Gemma Perkins
a wonderful depiction of all the great landmakrs of paris. Written very lovingly it seems that you hold this place very close to you. i saw that you said you dont know much french but a reader would never tell, the snippets of french fit in very well and give it some authenticity. well done
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a wonderful depiction of all the great landmakrs of paris. Written very lovingly it seems that you hold this place very close to you. i saw that you said you dont know much french but a reader would never tell, the snippets of french fit in very well and give it some authenticity. well done
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue
Because it's not metered many of the clever rhyme structure was missed by me. However non-meter can often be more effective and real, IMHO. You've created vivid images from your special memories and I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Hi, Sue
Because it's not metered many of the clever rhyme structure was missed by me. However non-meter can often be more effective and real, IMHO. You've created vivid images from your special memories and I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Whoa!! I am taking that as a HUGE compliment! Will slip that in my piggy bank...ha! So glad you liked this, Ray. Thanks very much for your great review. Big hugs, Sue
Comment from P1
i was in paris in november and believe me it is just
as cold there. it was freezing. but it is beautiful
and truly the city of romance. lovely poem sue.
hugs lynda.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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i was in paris in november and believe me it is just
as cold there. it was freezing. but it is beautiful
and truly the city of romance. lovely poem sue.
hugs lynda.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Yeah, I was there once in an October. Not as cold as November, I'm sure. Thanks very much for your review! Sue
Comment from Susan E. Pennycuff
With airline tickets soaring these days... this is about the best way to travel and about the only way I can afford!
You really did take me on a trip through Paris with such great visuals, I felt as though I was on a tour bus... thank you!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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With airline tickets soaring these days... this is about the best way to travel and about the only way I can afford!
You really did take me on a trip through Paris with such great visuals, I felt as though I was on a tour bus... thank you!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Susan, so glad you enjoyed this little sight-seeing trip! Ha! Thank you for your review and lovely compliments! Always appreciated...Sue
Comment from Roisin
C'est belle, mon amie. I love it. Paris is indeed a wonderful city and your love for it shines through in this poem. Your rhyme and rhythm are great and your imagery makes us want to walk the parisien streets with you.
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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C'est belle, mon amie. I love it. Paris is indeed a wonderful city and your love for it shines through in this poem. Your rhyme and rhythm are great and your imagery makes us want to walk the parisien streets with you.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Ah! Merci beaucoup, mon ami! So glad you enjoyed this mini vacation. Ha! Thank you for your great review and lovely comments! :-)) Sue
Comment from Poetic Friend
Sue, I have never been to Paris, but your poem took me there. Oh, how I adore the scenery you painted.
Your words make me want to hop on a plane and enjoy the scenes that you creatively and vividly described.
Excellent poem!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Sue, I have never been to Paris, but your poem took me there. Oh, how I adore the scenery you painted.
Your words make me want to hop on a plane and enjoy the scenes that you creatively and vividly described.
Excellent poem!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Poetic Friend, I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem! And I thank you for your most kind review and lovely compliments! Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Bryana
Your poem certainly brought back memories of my trips to Paris with my husband. I remember taken the dinner boat in the Seine river and standing for an hour in the rain waiting to enter the museum. It was worth it. I love Paris, my husband passed away but the memories will remain.
Your poem is beautiful, I saw nothing I would change.
It was a pleasure to read it.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Your poem certainly brought back memories of my trips to Paris with my husband. I remember taken the dinner boat in the Seine river and standing for an hour in the rain waiting to enter the museum. It was worth it. I love Paris, my husband passed away but the memories will remain.
Your poem is beautiful, I saw nothing I would change.
It was a pleasure to read it.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Bryana, I didn't get the chance to go on the dinner boat. Next trip, I must do that. But, loved standing on Pont Neuf overlooking the Seine and watching them all go by. What a beautiful scene it is. Thank you for sharing your memories with your husband there. Treasured memories, I'm sure. Thank you for your very kind review and lovely compliments. Regards, Sue
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like this nice descriptive poem about Paris.
The wistfulness that laced your words will make one wish to visit this fabulous city. I like the attempt to rhyme your lines. kudos
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I like this nice descriptive poem about Paris.
The wistfulness that laced your words will make one wish to visit this fabulous city. I like the attempt to rhyme your lines. kudos
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
beautiful presentation; I can relate to the snow and cold too in the author notes; well written; great imagery; uplifting; would make a lovely travel ad :-) no corrections!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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beautiful presentation; I can relate to the snow and cold too in the author notes; well written; great imagery; uplifting; would make a lovely travel ad :-) no corrections!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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A travel ad! Now, that's a great compliment! So glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Thank you for your great review. Always appreciated. :-)) Sue