CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Poetic Friend
I love this poem. The embrace, described in your poem, is one of tranquiity and comfort.
I ove your beautiful lines, especially in stanza 2.
I get a sense of solace when reading this poem.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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I love this poem. The embrace, described in your poem, is one of tranquiity and comfort.
I ove your beautiful lines, especially in stanza 2.
I get a sense of solace when reading this poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Poetic Friend, I really appreciate your generous review and very specific comments. SO glad you enjoyed my poem! Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from lovemyta
A very nice poem with a relaxed atmosphere in mind. You just hug me and I feel better, kind of treatment. That would be a really nice place to be right at this moment. Good poem.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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A very nice poem with a relaxed atmosphere in mind. You just hug me and I feel better, kind of treatment. That would be a really nice place to be right at this moment. Good poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Thank you so much for your generous review and comments! Regards, Sue
Comment from NadineM
This poem speaks of the comforting and consoling effect a big ole warm hug can offer. Sometimes we just need to go find that hug to hide in!
Take a look at the 4th line which seems to be floating.
Great imagery and message within your poem.
Thank-you for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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This poem speaks of the comforting and consoling effect a big ole warm hug can offer. Sometimes we just need to go find that hug to hide in!
Take a look at the 4th line which seems to be floating.
Great imagery and message within your poem.
Thank-you for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Nadine, I really appreciate your most generous review and specific comments. Means a lot! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from earthlybeing
Wonderful words that flow so freely. Some times no wards are need, the love is all that is needed to comfort and that embrace. Well done. Thanks, Jeanette
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Wonderful words that flow so freely. Some times no wards are need, the love is all that is needed to comfort and that embrace. Well done. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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I really appreciate your most generous review and specific comments. Means a lot! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
Such touching narrative! Why can't us guys write like that? Well at least we love to read it and more importantly experience it! Very lovely!
Dave
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Such touching narrative! Why can't us guys write like that? Well at least we love to read it and more importantly experience it! Very lovely!
Dave
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Dave, thank you so much for your very generous review and comments. And your honesty! Now, go and ask your gal for an embrace! HA!!! Glad you enjoyed my poem. With regards, Sue
Comment from desertpoem
nice flow here and i do like
Come rest with me now
In spirit, not a word
I give to you no burden
My breath is all that's heard
i would like to see a little more edge..but very nice read..fg
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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nice flow here and i do like
Come rest with me now
In spirit, not a word
I give to you no burden
My breath is all that's heard
i would like to see a little more edge..but very nice read..fg
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Thank you very much for your very generous review and all comments! Regards, Sue
Comment from Wilder
Oh I wish I had another six star to give. This touched me really deeply and I'm not even sure why. It flowed so easily, read like a song. That last part- when you offer your embrace.. That was awesome. Great work!
Wilder
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Oh I wish I had another six star to give. This touched me really deeply and I'm not even sure why. It flowed so easily, read like a song. That last part- when you offer your embrace.. That was awesome. Great work!
Wilder
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Wilder, I am so very humbled by your review. Am so glad it resonated with you. Thank you very much for your very generous review and all your lovely comments.....Warmest regards, Sue
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most welcome!
Wilder
Comment from E. W. Crowe
Nice poem, 6steezkid. Took me a minute to figure out your screen name. 60's kid, right? I hope. Anyway, the blessings of love often not only affect our physical but our mental as well. Good Job.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Nice poem, 6steezkid. Took me a minute to figure out your screen name. 60's kid, right? I hope. Anyway, the blessings of love often not only affect our physical but our mental as well. Good Job.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Yep, I'm a 60's kid! Glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you very much for your very generous review and comments! With regards, Sue
Comment from morney
This is an absolute pleasure to read. It's so softly beautiful - and just as you write about being in a calm space, reading this poem has put me in a calm place.
I love the line "In spirit, not a word.."
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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This is an absolute pleasure to read. It's so softly beautiful - and just as you write about being in a calm space, reading this poem has put me in a calm place.
I love the line "In spirit, not a word.."
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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morney, thank you so much for your generous review and lovely comments. To know that the words put you in a calm place is extremely touching. (yeah...I like that line too - ha!) Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from ROBbury
This is a poem with great insight. I am amazed at the way it read so easily with such great reflection. Nice rhyming scheme to convey such a wonderful message.
Well Done!
ROB
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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This is a poem with great insight. I am amazed at the way it read so easily with such great reflection. Nice rhyming scheme to convey such a wonderful message.
Well Done!
ROB
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Rob, Thanks again for reading my work. Your review and comments are so much appreciated! Kindest regards, Sue