Comment from Polly_Pisces

Excellent

LOL...Too funny, very clever and oh so sassy...I love it...how could I knot?...hehe...And that it's written by a man...well that just makes it even better..hehe...well done man....Polly

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2007

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007

I am very glad that you enjoyed it. I find that this is a lot funnier in word, then experience. O-Objects in the way only appear after you have walked into them. After the last five years, it was extemely pleasurable to find myself in this situation. I felt that society would benefit from being reminded about such moments, these days we are wrapped too tight.

Comment from poeticcat2003

Excellent

Nice accrostic. Well written, nice formatting. Great presentation. I wouldn't change a thing. I especially like the liberty you took with nonsensical. Best of luck to you.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2007

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007

Thank you very much for your opinion.

Comment from ruthbell

Good

Well Done, I really liked this poem, the shortness of it all. However I do feel as though the last line is a cop out, it works , but in comparison to the other parts of the poem , I think you could do better.

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2007

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007

I appreciate your opinion. I actually put in a lot of thought on that one, but having the experience related in the poem, I had the honor, of walking up to her and enjoyable making a complete fool of myself. Any thing to buy a couple of more seconds and confound her. See, "Robin's Poem."

Comment from softheartedone

Excellent

I agree wholeheartedly! You say a mouthful with so few words. I had to giggle a little when reading this. And, you even made up your own word at the end, hah! Nice one. Hugs, Softy

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2007

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007

I am glad you enjoyed it!

Comment from kristin_mast

Excellent

I really liked the way you organized the poem, first describing your observation of the vigorous flirt, and then the negative response of the one receiving the attention. The adjectives you picked, as well as the colors, really enhanced the mood of your poem. I found it to be very creative and well-done.
Kristin

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2007

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007

I really appreciate your observation and opinion. What better way to show the truth, then make a complete fool of yourself. Not a come on, but totally!

Comment from SnowBound

Excellent

LOL
Knon

ahuh. It is a cute little poem. Your acrostic works and your poem as a whole is enjoyable. Nicely formulated.

SnowBound

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2007

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007

Thank you very much. I hate to say it, it speaks the truth!