Comment from Doreen Dulally

Excellent

A jewel never glistens
In the absence of pure light .....so true

but beauty can be measured by the broadness of the smile

I liked your poem very much

it flowed well and the rhyming was perfect

good luck with this one

nothing I can say that would improve this well written poem

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2006

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2006

Thank you Doreen.

reply by Doreen Dulally on 14-Nov-2006

you are wellcome

Comment from Alyshah

Excellent

What a wonderful poem based on the Eyes of the Soul picture show with the poem

The write demonstrates her mastery of the rhym
Words flow easily and clearly
Imagery of Souls giftts are poetically conveyed by words that flow easily and clearly.

Wonderful piece! I am attracted to these lines:

When the eyes see with our spirit
The gifts of heart are opened
Selfish wants no longer plead
Take the time to notice sparkle
In the eyes of someone fair

There are treasures that lay hiding
Underneath a face that's plain

By the glitter in the night
A jewel never glistens
In the absence of pure light

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2006

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

You have expressed your inner thoughts very well this translates to beauty is sometimes skin deep or maybe beauty is in they eye of the holder I really like the photograph chosen to use with your poem this lady has such a weathered face but she is still smiling an inspiration to us all regards Fuller

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2006