The Kirby Case - Part 2
A detective attempts to catch a serial killer29 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is an extraordinary project you've started, and the mystery and suspense have already begun. Your perfect meter makes your poetry a delight to read. I look forward to enjoying the next chapters.
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This is an extraordinary project you've started, and the mystery and suspense have already begun. Your perfect meter makes your poetry a delight to read. I look forward to enjoying the next chapters.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a thought task to find a serial killer and my husband was involved in solving murders in the past and many detectives are haunted by these cases until they are solved. Another fine poem about the hunt for this killer, love Dolly x
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It is a thought task to find a serial killer and my husband was involved in solving murders in the past and many detectives are haunted by these cases until they are solved. Another fine poem about the hunt for this killer, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
They're going to catch this low-life by the sound of it! Another fascinating and well-crafted verse, Pam! This is better than Netflix:) I like your cunningly reversed "bounds and leaps" at the end. Well done! Debbie
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They're going to catch this low-life by the sound of it! Another fascinating and well-crafted verse, Pam! This is better than Netflix:) I like your cunningly reversed "bounds and leaps" at the end. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Darlene BoClair
As I continue to read each couple of lines are perfecting ryhmed. I read your thoughts on the number three.
Three has got to be a clue. I'll continue to read for more clues the detectives are yet to find.
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As I continue to read each couple of lines are perfecting ryhmed. I read your thoughts on the number three.
Three has got to be a clue. I'll continue to read for more clues the detectives are yet to find.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Pam and good morning. Your second installment to this very talented write also captures the reader's attention as in a story, but the sing song of iambic meter coupled with great end rhymes keeps this a notch above the rest. Another great job!
Melissa
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Hello Pam and good morning. Your second installment to this very talented write also captures the reader's attention as in a story, but the sing song of iambic meter coupled with great end rhymes keeps this a notch above the rest. Another great job!
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing part 2 with us of this poetic murder mystery. I can't wait to read more. You've done a great job writing this. It seems they're getting closer to the serial killer.
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Thank you for sharing part 2 with us of this poetic murder mystery. I can't wait to read more. You've done a great job writing this. It seems they're getting closer to the serial killer.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Charles D Ezell
We are getting closer, now we wait for another solid clue one plus one make two. we keep in mind each step we take as we hope for a break. You did well with this.
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We are getting closer, now we wait for another solid clue one plus one make two. we keep in mind each step we take as we hope for a break. You did well with this.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Tina Crute
Wow. I hope they catch this guy. I'm not sure if this is fact or fiction, but either way, it's intensely interesting. I want to know more! The plot has thickened, but I am sure you will stir it up again soon! Thanks for sharing this mystery with us. It's a nice change of pace.
Tina
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Wow. I hope they catch this guy. I'm not sure if this is fact or fiction, but either way, it's intensely interesting. I want to know more! The plot has thickened, but I am sure you will stir it up again soon! Thanks for sharing this mystery with us. It's a nice change of pace.
Tina
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I am someone who is entralled, for whatever reason, by serial killers, and have studied them for years. I do not recall hearing about this one. You are doing a great job of getting in so many facts and putting it in a poetic format. Keep 'em coming.
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I am someone who is entralled, for whatever reason, by serial killers, and have studied them for years. I do not recall hearing about this one. You are doing a great job of getting in so many facts and putting it in a poetic format. Keep 'em coming.
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
