The Kirby Case - Part 1
A detective attempts to find a serial killer32 total reviews
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Enjoying you post concerning the problem. Not to see the scripture unfold, Everything done in secret comes to light either good or bad Ecc-12. The guy looks the part. Well done.
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Enjoying you post concerning the problem. Not to see the scripture unfold, Everything done in secret comes to light either good or bad Ecc-12. The guy looks the part. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Impressive to take a criminal case and translate it into poetry so effectively! I will be anxious to read the continuing saga. Nicely penned and so interesting.
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Impressive to take a criminal case and translate it into poetry so effectively! I will be anxious to read the continuing saga. Nicely penned and so interesting.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Tina Crute
There's something about reading about these crimes, in a poetic way, that
highlights the drama and horror of it. Honestly, it may be that I do not usually read crime news so it's hitting me hard. How you managed to rhyme and impart so much info in not so many lines, is a feat. Your writing is very intriguing and I have to read more!
Tina
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There's something about reading about these crimes, in a poetic way, that
highlights the drama and horror of it. Honestly, it may be that I do not usually read crime news so it's hitting me hard. How you managed to rhyme and impart so much info in not so many lines, is a feat. Your writing is very intriguing and I have to read more!
Tina
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from nomi338
God forgive me if I come across as a smart ass but, if the killings all take place on Kirby's field, why not place or hide cameras in as many places and spaces as possible. Modern tech makes wide ranging cameras that are small to look at but cover wide areas. I may be jumping the gun on this one and if I am I seriously apologize for that.
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God forgive me if I come across as a smart ass but, if the killings all take place on Kirby's field, why not place or hide cameras in as many places and spaces as possible. Modern tech makes wide ranging cameras that are small to look at but cover wide areas. I may be jumping the gun on this one and if I am I seriously apologize for that.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Darlene BoClair
This poetic mystery story reads similar to a television episode of "Law and Order SUV". Being a poem I enjoy the rhyming patern of lines like (M.O. - slow) throughout the story. I like the visionary details of the bodies of the women. I like the media involvement that didn't know all the facts. I enjoyed a good mystery. I wait on the next installments of how this scary serial killer is caught in "The Kirby
Case".
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This poetic mystery story reads similar to a television episode of "Law and Order SUV". Being a poem I enjoy the rhyming patern of lines like (M.O. - slow) throughout the story. I like the visionary details of the bodies of the women. I like the media involvement that didn't know all the facts. I enjoyed a good mystery. I wait on the next installments of how this scary serial killer is caught in "The Kirby
Case".
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Elizabeth Delaney
The poem excels in its suspenseful atmosphere, vivid details. The rhythm and rhyme enhance the tension, making the mystery both gripping and immersive.
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The poem excels in its suspenseful atmosphere, vivid details. The rhythm and rhyme enhance the tension, making the mystery both gripping and immersive.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Gloria ....
Very well done, Pam. Your metre and rhymes are superb as always and the story itself is presented through poetry at a good pace to make it interesting.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
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Very well done, Pam. Your metre and rhymes are superb as always and the story itself is presented through poetry at a good pace to make it interesting.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from kahpot
So much violence in the world now a days, though with new technology, they are solving some very important cold cases, and have a lot better information on recent cases, very well written, and I look forward to your future posts****kahpot
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So much violence in the world now a days, though with new technology, they are solving some very important cold cases, and have a lot better information on recent cases, very well written, and I look forward to your future posts****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Barry Penfold
An interesting and well written piece of poetry. Telling the story through a poem is a different approach but keep on going. I am looking forward to the next instalments.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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An interesting and well written piece of poetry. Telling the story through a poem is a different approach but keep on going. I am looking forward to the next instalments.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from bob cullen
You sure know how to leave the reader hanging. A very intriguing read. Is this actually a factual case, or just a piece of fiction. I can't wait to read the next verse. Like i say, most intriguing.
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You sure know how to leave the reader hanging. A very intriguing read. Is this actually a factual case, or just a piece of fiction. I can't wait to read the next verse. Like i say, most intriguing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
