Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so unique. The way you describe the granite retreat and the strength of the Manistone is wonderful. I love your creative word choices like "brothestone" and "sistestone". Your poem has an almost magical feel.
Fantastic work - it's truly unique and well written!
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
Michael, you wanna be with your kind words of encouragement?I thank you for them! I need some tweaks, cuz.It seemed to go bumpy in places.Yeah, reads smoother. Thank you so much for your kind words. Your time your review all that you do I appreciate it. Hope you have a great night too!