Whispers
a 5-7-5 poetic form25 total reviews
Comment from RodG
Your poem makes me want to see if flickering candles could inspire me to write more. You make it easy for us to visualize this scene of flickering wild shadows on windless evening. Rod
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Your poem makes me want to see if flickering candles could inspire me to write more. You make it easy for us to visualize this scene of flickering wild shadows on windless evening. Rod
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hello Rod... remember Dean K? He told me once to write at night to the light of a candle and that the inspiration would be phenomenal... I have tried it and have gotten really good results. Now, you must remember he wrote a lot of spooky stuff ~ mine isn't. Anyway, thanks so much for your review.
Melissa
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I remember Dean whose writing was exceptional.
Comment from kahpot
Yes, shadows can be a great inspiration, as they create all sorts of shapes that get the imagination turning, an excellent 5-7-5 entry, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Yes, shadows can be a great inspiration, as they create all sorts of shapes that get the imagination turning, an excellent 5-7-5 entry, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hello Kim... thanks so much for the review. My muse can seem to flicker and wane, just like a candle, so when she's whispering, I had better pay attention. LOL. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Jesse James Doty
So, even on windless nights the muse whispers cast wild shadows letting us know you are about to write something magnificent. I love the idea of wild shadows against the wall of a candle with no wind at all to send it to the moon and above.
Jesse
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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So, even on windless nights the muse whispers cast wild shadows letting us know you are about to write something magnificent. I love the idea of wild shadows against the wall of a candle with no wind at all to send it to the moon and above.
Jesse
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hello Jesse. Well, that's me trying to infuse a bit of mystery again... and since all I am writing seems to be the shorter poems, well, I make it hard on myself. Hopefully, after the first of the year, longer poems will be born. Thanks so much, my friend.
Melissa
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Keep trying. Your muse will develop a great poem in a short form if you want it hard enough.
Jesse
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Sugarray,
This is a great 5-7-5 poem. I like how your whispering muse is in the house with the shadows. I can't keep track of my muse she likes to disappear on me.
The picture you chose compliments the poem nicely.
Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Sugarray,
This is a great 5-7-5 poem. I like how your whispering muse is in the house with the shadows. I can't keep track of my muse she likes to disappear on me.
The picture you chose compliments the poem nicely.
Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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thank you so much, Cecilia! I really appreciate it.
Melissa
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You're welcome
Comment from patcelaw
Very nicely read 575 for the contest and wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day your presentation is very nice too and you have a terrific year with God's blessings on your life. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Very nicely read 575 for the contest and wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day your presentation is very nice too and you have a terrific year with God's blessings on your life. Patricia.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you Patricia!!
Melissa
