Once I Was
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Comment from Lana Marie
This poem you created from your poetry prompt brings me briefly down a memory lane I can relate to. That's great that you have made friends on fan story. Keep stirring up that writing gift.!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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This poem you created from your poetry prompt brings me briefly down a memory lane I can relate to. That's great that you have made friends on fan story. Keep stirring up that writing gift.!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Lana,
Thank you for the wonderful review and compliment.
Cecilia
Comment from Pearl Edwards
The lines in your poem, Once I Was applies to many of us oldies who have also been lucky enough to find a new bunch of friends on fanstory. I enjoyed the read and yesm I could relate.Nice one Cecilia,
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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The lines in your poem, Once I Was applies to many of us oldies who have also been lucky enough to find a new bunch of friends on fanstory. I enjoyed the read and yesm I could relate.Nice one Cecilia,
cheers
valda
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Pearl,
Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I have made more friends on Fanstory than here in Texas. I have moved so many times I tend to lose track of friends. Here I have you all together.
Cecilia
Comment from lancellot
This is nice. I would look at that last stanza though. You may not want to reuse friends three times.
notes:
Riding my bike all over roaming
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Riding my bike all over just to roam
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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This is nice. I would look at that last stanza though. You may not want to reuse friends three times.
notes:
Riding my bike all over roaming
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Riding my bike all over just to roam
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Iancellot,
Thank you for the kind review. I will look it over and see how I can make changes. Thank you for the suggestion.
Cecilia
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a sad poem. Once we all were so many wonderful things. We make the most of our situations though. Hence the Fan story friends come in to play. They are a treasure after all.
This is a heartfelt poem, Cecilia. I'm glad that I read it.
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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What a sad poem. Once we all were so many wonderful things. We make the most of our situations though. Hence the Fan story friends come in to play. They are a treasure after all.
This is a heartfelt poem, Cecilia. I'm glad that I read it.
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Debbie,
Thank you for the wonderful review. This is the only place I have friends in one place. I have moved so many times I have lost track of people and since being in Texas I have made only one friend and she is getting ready to move back to California.
Cecilia
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That is such a sad situation. I have lost track of all my school friends. Facebook just doesn't cut it for me.
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I joined the Navy and never looked back. I too have lost track of a lot of people. I still have a few Navy friends.
I'll stick to my Fanstory friends you are always available
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Yes we are