The Watchman
A reflection upon Ezekiel 3:1728 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I Googled Ezekiel 3:17 to compare with your poem. The Watchman appears to have an awesome responsibility for the people of Israel. Your line "His orders from the Master are so clear" sums it up--the Lord makes himself and the Watchman's task totally clear.
We find our inspiration from many places, and I enjoyed reading this Bible-inspired poem of yours.
You might put the verse from Ezekiel in your author's notes so that others can see exactly what your inspiration was.
xo
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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I Googled Ezekiel 3:17 to compare with your poem. The Watchman appears to have an awesome responsibility for the people of Israel. Your line "His orders from the Master are so clear" sums it up--the Lord makes himself and the Watchman's task totally clear.
We find our inspiration from many places, and I enjoyed reading this Bible-inspired poem of yours.
You might put the verse from Ezekiel in your author's notes so that others can see exactly what your inspiration was.
xo
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hello Pam.
I appreciate your positive feedback on the content and style. The author's notes will be updated with a verse and another section fully explaining the Watchmen's role.
Robert
Comment from TPAC
Well spoken, illustrating the responsibilities of the Watchman: patrolling officer covering the boundaries they are govern to watch. Super captivating read in my given viewpoint.
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Well spoken, illustrating the responsibilities of the Watchman: patrolling officer covering the boundaries they are govern to watch. Super captivating read in my given viewpoint.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you TPAC for your insightful and positive comments about the poem. The watchman has great responsibility.
Robert
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The city is safe with this guy watching over it and I enjoyed your well metered words and matching rhymes in this skilful poem Robert, a joy to read, love Dolly x
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The city is safe with this guy watching over it and I enjoyed your well metered words and matching rhymes in this skilful poem Robert, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hi Dolly.
The watchman's mandate to protect and guide the people comes directly from God. I appreciate your feedback and the time you dedicated to reading my poem.
Robert
Comment from Lana Marie
I might have to go back and read the book of Ezekiel so I can see where you got the inspiration for writing this poem. Thanks for sharing your writing gift with us to review. Keep it up.
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I might have to go back and read the book of Ezekiel so I can see where you got the inspiration for writing this poem. Thanks for sharing your writing gift with us to review. Keep it up.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hello Lana.
Thank you for your thoughtful, and meaningful comments about the poem. You can also read Ezekiel 33: 1-9 to see the full picture of the relationship between the Lord and the Watchman. I appreciate your time and effort.
Robert
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is a bold, creative commentary on Ezekiel 3:17 (which I did take a few minutes to read and ponder).
You examined this scenario from various perspectives: the Watchman himself, the Master who commands him; and the people who are in need of protection, and who may be afraid, yet who must also make a choice to heed the Watchman's warning.
Orders from the Master must be unambiguous and clear, for the Watchman to succeed in his task, and yet the Master is faithful to convey that clear call, and the Watchman is faithful to proclaim it. All that remains is for each of us to listen.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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This is a bold, creative commentary on Ezekiel 3:17 (which I did take a few minutes to read and ponder).
You examined this scenario from various perspectives: the Watchman himself, the Master who commands him; and the people who are in need of protection, and who may be afraid, yet who must also make a choice to heed the Watchman's warning.
Orders from the Master must be unambiguous and clear, for the Watchman to succeed in his task, and yet the Master is faithful to convey that clear call, and the Watchman is faithful to proclaim it. All that remains is for each of us to listen.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hello Mary Kay.
I thank you for your complimentary and insightful understanding of the poem. You clearly spent time reading and digesting the words and I appreciate your time and your effort. Your impression of the poem is meaningful to me. Thank you
Robert
Comment from judiverse
Great work. This is beautifully rhymed, and I love the imagery of the Watchman, guarding the wall and keeping the city safe. We have been lacking a Watchman in the U.S., just when the country needs one. People want to feel safe again. The Watchman is under God's command. Keeping people safe is an awesome task, as you indicate. Very powerful. judi
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Great work. This is beautifully rhymed, and I love the imagery of the Watchman, guarding the wall and keeping the city safe. We have been lacking a Watchman in the U.S., just when the country needs one. People want to feel safe again. The Watchman is under God's command. Keeping people safe is an awesome task, as you indicate. Very powerful. judi
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hello Judi.
Thank you for your positive comments about the content and writing style. This story of the watchman is stated in Ezekiel 33: 1- 9. It has OT and NT implications.
Robert
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Beautiful poem about the Watchman. I remember studying about the Watchman in Sunday School class a a child. I was quite fascinated by his name but at thetime didn't understand his purpose. Thanks for sharing.
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Beautiful poem about the Watchman. I remember studying about the Watchman in Sunday School class a a child. I was quite fascinated by his name but at thetime didn't understand his purpose. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hello Marilyn.
Thank you for your positive comments about the Watchman. The complete story of how he arose to the tower is in Ezekiel 33:1-9. This poem is merely a reflection upon his duties.
Robert
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a nice retelling of the biblical injunction in Ezekiel to be a watchman for the lord.
there is a TV series based on these themes Co-PIot provided background i meant the series titled Watchmen.
Ah, got it! The TV series "Watchmen," created by Damon Lindelof and based on the graphic novel by Alan Moore and Dave Gibbons, doesn't have a direct connection to the biblical verse in Ezekiel. However, the show does explore themes of morality, justice, and the nature of heroism, which can be seen as loosely related to the concept of a "watchman" in a broader sense.
The show delves into complex social and political issues, including race relations and the legacy of historical events, while also incorporating elements of superhero mythology. It's a thought-provoking series that builds on the original comic's themes and adds new layers of storytelling.
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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a nice retelling of the biblical injunction in Ezekiel to be a watchman for the lord.
there is a TV series based on these themes Co-PIot provided background i meant the series titled Watchmen.
Ah, got it! The TV series "Watchmen," created by Damon Lindelof and based on the graphic novel by Alan Moore and Dave Gibbons, doesn't have a direct connection to the biblical verse in Ezekiel. However, the show does explore themes of morality, justice, and the nature of heroism, which can be seen as loosely related to the concept of a "watchman" in a broader sense.
The show delves into complex social and political issues, including race relations and the legacy of historical events, while also incorporating elements of superhero mythology. It's a thought-provoking series that builds on the original comic's themes and adds new layers of storytelling.
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind words about my poem. I have written a couple of poems regarding the Watchmen in Ezekiel. I appreciate your comments on the TV series. I will have to see if I can get a look at that.
Robert