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Willing Hearts

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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I really enjoyed that story of Sami's grandparents. I expect many people were life that, where the parents couldn't support all their children. But it turned out they did Sami's grandmother a big favour! And now Noah knows that's what she want her marriage to be like. And that is only right, you don't want to settle for less. Lovely chapter, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, you leave no doubt how these two feel about each other. It's nice to see things progressing slowly rather than all at once as is most often in life these days. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    I believe lasting love needs to be slowly developed. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
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There were no problems; it was just real good writing. Wow! My courtship was a lot different than that of Grandma and Grandpa. My wife and I wrote to one another, but the first time I saw her, I knew God meant her for me. I believe proposed on the second date. That is highly uncharacteristic for me as I was no womanizer. I don't know what I would have done had she said "No". I like the way the story is progressing, but am disheartened it will be over soon.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    I'm ready to start a new one as soon as this one is finished. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by jim vecchio on 02-Dec-2024
    I'll be there when it starts!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Barbara,

This is a great chapter in your book. It appears that Noah is acting a little secretively. I wonder what he has up his sleeve. You are a great author who keeps their reader engaged and wanting more.

Well done

Cecilia

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 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 01-Dec-2024
    Barbara,

    You're welcome

    Cecilia
Comment from Sanku
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Sami and Noah spent a wonderful day together .I admire Noah for showwing keen interest in Sami's family stories .And what an endearing story! I wonder men these days will have such patience. This was very enjoyable episode ..

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 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    I doubt most of them would. There are a few out there who would. Thank you for the kind review.