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When depression strikes22 total reviews
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Okay, Babe, It isn't funny but how strange that I am in the middle of writing a poem about judgment. That it is so horrible to judge what someone does or doesn't do when you haven't got a clue about what is going on with them.
And I don't know what is going on with you, but glad you wrote this and in case it makes a difference to hear this I'd like to ask you to put on a YouTube video and know that it is from some of us here. It is "You've got a friend" by James Taylor. Remember how much you are loved here, and think about all the wonderful friends you have made, and all the endearing comments from your poem.
It won't change a lot of things but I hope it helps to know someone cares a lot about you and one of them is me. Like I said I hope you know that you are loved here. If you need anything please let me know. Lovely poem, just sad subject.
Virtual Six, for you!! Love, Debi. HUG!!!
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Okay, Babe, It isn't funny but how strange that I am in the middle of writing a poem about judgment. That it is so horrible to judge what someone does or doesn't do when you haven't got a clue about what is going on with them.
And I don't know what is going on with you, but glad you wrote this and in case it makes a difference to hear this I'd like to ask you to put on a YouTube video and know that it is from some of us here. It is "You've got a friend" by James Taylor. Remember how much you are loved here, and think about all the wonderful friends you have made, and all the endearing comments from your poem.
It won't change a lot of things but I hope it helps to know someone cares a lot about you and one of them is me. Like I said I hope you know that you are loved here. If you need anything please let me know. Lovely poem, just sad subject.
Virtual Six, for you!! Love, Debi. HUG!!!
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Girlfriend,
I am fine. I'm thankful for all my new friends. It gives me an outlet to talk to people on here. I actually wrote that poem months ago, but I thought what the heck I'll post it and see what happens.
Thank you for being my friend. I was wondering where you been. Haven't seen you here on Fanstory. YOU doing ok?
Cecilia
Comment from TPAC
You have deposited many viewpoints for your reader to consider, believing there a more profound point that could be conveyed within your selected stir of ingredients. I'm suggesting as a possible start.
Then go out an do.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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You have deposited many viewpoints for your reader to consider, believing there a more profound point that could be conveyed within your selected stir of ingredients. I'm suggesting as a possible start.
Then go out an do.
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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TPAC,
Thank you for your kind review.
I wrote a poem called "Depression" that pretty much sums up the battle.
Cecilia