Comment from Michele Harber

Excellent

I really like this. It's simple yet profound. If each of us teaches, through word or action, we can change the world! Perhaps the most important lines in the poem are, "we must lead not follow, today, not tomorrow." Thank you for offering words to live by. I hope I can live up to them.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

I know you can, Michele. You've got hutspa and it shows in the way you write your poetry.
Thanks for being one of the first to review this poem.
It feels good to get back to writing poetry for a change.
Your support means a lot to me.
Have a happy day.
Jesse

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Yes, we must continue to use our own brains and not follow anybody. If in question, then pray about it. God will give us answers. I hope you know you remain in my prayers.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thanks for adding me to your prayer list.
Jesse