June's Purple Lily
5-7-5 haiku28 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
What a nice small poem. I don't see your stuff very often.
It is hard to see the lily with the background matching so closely to the flower. Well, our scary storm never came, so we are safe once again. Keep writing more stuff. Karen
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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What a nice small poem. I don't see your stuff very often.
It is hard to see the lily with the background matching so closely to the flower. Well, our scary storm never came, so we are safe once again. Keep writing more stuff. Karen
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your great review. I have been a little distracted lately sewing Barbie doll clothes for little girls in church and working on some Harry Potter art. I will post more often once the weather turns snowy.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, June's Purple Lily, has the proper formatting and sends the power of potential out as we consider the world going on with the help of these significant evolutions.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This 5-7-5, June's Purple Lily, has the proper formatting and sends the power of potential out as we consider the world going on with the help of these significant evolutions.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your super comments.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Upward/forward. i.d.k. but when I tihnk of flowers they generally face the sun. Maybe not for Lillies. Yet, for a short entry this is as good as any. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Upward/forward. i.d.k. but when I tihnk of flowers they generally face the sun. Maybe not for Lillies. Yet, for a short entry this is as good as any. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your great review. Yes, flowers follow the sun. But I once learned plants grow better if you play Mozart and other Classical music. No Classical music outside, so songbirds will do!
Comment from Tim Margetts
I love lilies, but unfortunately, like many plants, they are banned from my house because of my cats.
This is a great little poem and I can visualise this flower following the sun, leaning into the day as the robin sings
Tim
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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I love lilies, but unfortunately, like many plants, they are banned from my house because of my cats.
This is a great little poem and I can visualise this flower following the sun, leaning into the day as the robin sings
Tim
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your great review, Tim.
Comment from royowen
What a very cool 5/7/5 Crystie, the colour variables really work very well indeed, they are most impressive, I love this entry in this contest, so lovely the shades of purple Dear friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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What a very cool 5/7/5 Crystie, the colour variables really work very well indeed, they are most impressive, I love this entry in this contest, so lovely the shades of purple Dear friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review!
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Well done
Comment from CM Pickard
It's been so much fun reading everyone's poems for this contest, and yours really stands out with its connection to nature. Great job and good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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It's been so much fun reading everyone's poems for this contest, and yours really stands out with its connection to nature. Great job and good luck.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from kahpot
It is amazing how nature communicates, even between the flowers and all its critters, the song of the robin is wonderful music, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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It is amazing how nature communicates, even between the flowers and all its critters, the song of the robin is wonderful music, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your kind comments today!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This endearing poem reminds us how we appreciate the sights and sounds of wildlife and even the Lily appreciates the robin's song here, much enjoyed Crystie, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This endearing poem reminds us how we appreciate the sights and sounds of wildlife and even the Lily appreciates the robin's song here, much enjoyed Crystie, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your perceptive comments in your review!