Anatomy of a Marriage
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
The pressure Marsha is under is too much for anyone to bear. I'm hoping that because Tracie has been suspended that will shake all of them from doing drugs. Stop it before it gets started. Now that has been sorted reasonably well, Marsha still has the 'woman' and Trenton to sort out. I think Trenton might not have agreed so readily to go into rehab if he had wanted to be with that other woman. It might have been a relief in a way. This was a really excellent chapter, my friend. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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The pressure Marsha is under is too much for anyone to bear. I'm hoping that because Tracie has been suspended that will shake all of them from doing drugs. Stop it before it gets started. Now that has been sorted reasonably well, Marsha still has the 'woman' and Trenton to sort out. I think Trenton might not have agreed so readily to go into rehab if he had wanted to be with that other woman. It might have been a relief in a way. This was a really excellent chapter, my friend. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you Sandra. I glad you like my chapter. Thank you so much for the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think I would also eavesdrop on my children's conversations if they were in trouble Beth. How awful to be betrayed by the man you love and respected and it is hard to stop loving someone, even when they hurt you like this, a very sensitive post Beth, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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I think I would also eavesdrop on my children's conversations if they were in trouble Beth. How awful to be betrayed by the man you love and respected and it is hard to stop loving someone, even when they hurt you like this, a very sensitive post Beth, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. You can learn a lot by eavesdropping sometimes, I'm glad you liked it.
Beth