Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

I have never heard of a better explanation on love, except that with knowledge love will pass away. How ridiculous.
Your writing as usual is full of you joy. Have a good weekend. karen

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks Karen for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 09-Nov-2024

:-)

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Hi Roy,

This is an awesome poem. I wouldn't expect anything less. This poem rhymes nicely, and flows to completion of the story.

There is a line that is confusing and I am wondering if something is missing. It's stanza four, first line: "The only thing this universe/that's not affected by loves's curse.

Great job as always.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks Cecilia for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 08-Nov-2024

You're welcome

Cecilia

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

It is the greatest of the gifts. We as followers of Christ are called to show love even to our enemies, not foolishly, but with a heart of forgiveness. Well written poem about tge greatest of the gifts, which in fact, was the reason God gave his only begotten son.
RJ

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks again RJ, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

This brought to mind The Beatles' song, All You Need is Love.

"It holds no grudge, forgives all debt, and thus love's sun will never set."

We need that love in our world right now.

Thanks for sharing, Roy.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks again Pam for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

True love is not easy, for it is sacrificial, involves forgiveness, and models itself on Jesus. It's easy to talk about love but hard to offer - yet there is nothing the world needs more than love, and it can only find its source in God who is love.
Wendy

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks Wendy for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

There truly is no other option than to love. It should be the easiest thing we do and we make it so difficult. I pray that our country can find our way back to that. thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks again Marilyn, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for this reminder of the greatest commandment - to Love the Lord and the second, to love our fellow humans as we love ourselves. It's hard to remember when we are feeling bad about the world.

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 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks Helen for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Thank you, Roy, for this wonderful poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from your words. This is so very true, and we all need to understand what Jesus wants us to do, not man. May God bless you, my friend!

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 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks again Teri for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy