Prayer at the bridge.
A poem22 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
The more of your poetry I read, the more I see how blessed you are to capture the grace and mercy He gives you in your words.
This poem is a great example of your talent and i thank you for sharing it.
Tim.
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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The more of your poetry I read, the more I see how blessed you are to capture the grace and mercy He gives you in your words.
This poem is a great example of your talent and i thank you for sharing it.
Tim.
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks Marietta, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
I found the second last line impossible to understand. Did you mean "I thank our Father ..."? Also, I would suggest line 4 reads "Because He cleansed me, made me whole" as that would be better for the metre and flow. But of course, it's your poem - this is a suggestion only.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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I found the second last line impossible to understand. Did you mean "I thank our Father ..."? Also, I would suggest line 4 reads "Because He cleansed me, made me whole" as that would be better for the metre and flow. But of course, it's your poem - this is a suggestion only.
Wendy
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks Wendy, I wrote this in haste and a little careless, I thank you for graciousness and attention. Thanks so much, blessings Roy