The Devil Fights Back
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Oh, Fran is in quite a bind here! You did a great job setting the tension. Her history with her colleagues and that unforgettable nickname adds to her story. I love the mix of suspense around Dipraxa and her brother's involvement - very intriguing! This is shaping up to be a thrilling story!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Oh, Fran is in quite a bind here! You did a great job setting the tension. Her history with her colleagues and that unforgettable nickname adds to her story. I love the mix of suspense around Dipraxa and her brother's involvement - very intriguing! This is shaping up to be a thrilling story!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks very much, Michael. Yes, she's in a bind, but she's a bit of a maverick and doesn't necessarily follow every order. So glad you're enjoying it.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
So, how did it happen, that the exact formula got into the wrong hands?
Well written, error-free as near as I can tell.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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So, how did it happen, that the exact formula got into the wrong hands?
Well written, error-free as near as I can tell.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Wayne. We shall soon find out. The bigger issue will be, what do they do about it now that it's out?
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shoot Brian
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Ha ha ha!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Making drugs in our own backyard is probably not something that is allowed in America, especially such a powerful drug as this one. It is not surprising that there are repercussions. The investigations begin. Another fine chapter in your story Jim, love Dolly x
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Making drugs in our own backyard is probably not something that is allowed in America, especially such a powerful drug as this one. It is not surprising that there are repercussions. The investigations begin. Another fine chapter in your story Jim, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Dolly. Fran and Brian's biggest fear has come to fruition. Dipraxa has gotten out. Now it's like Covid which either accidentally or purposefully made it out of a Chinese lab and is spreading everywhere.