Our First Kiss
3-6-9 poem for contest34 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is so romantic and moving Katiemae as everything changed for you with this first kiss and I loved your dramatic words to mark this occasion, a wonderful poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
This is so romantic and moving Katiemae as everything changed for you with this first kiss and I loved your dramatic words to mark this occasion, a wonderful poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much Dolly!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Katiemae.
-You have written good poems with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and occasional rhyme.
-A very good opening verse.
-The second verse expands on the first
showing the deep love you see in this person.
-A very good closing verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Katiemae.
-You have written good poems with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and occasional rhyme.
-A very good opening verse.
-The second verse expands on the first
showing the deep love you see in this person.
-A very good closing verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much Pam!
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You are very welcome, Katiemae.
Comment from royowen
How cute is this? I think there are quite a few life long, and I hope eternal relationships have been sealed this way, they are amazing, I think I was always a romantic, created in my youth, beautifully written KatieMae, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
How cute is this? I think there are quite a few life long, and I hope eternal relationships have been sealed this way, they are amazing, I think I was always a romantic, created in my youth, beautifully written KatieMae, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much Roy!
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My pleasure
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Katiemae,
Like me, you're in a romantic mood. I meet my husband-to-be when I was 12; so I can relate to this one. Just precious in the unique form.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the 3-6-9 poetry contest.
Sal Xoxo's
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
Dear Katiemae,
Like me, you're in a romantic mood. I meet my husband-to-be when I was 12; so I can relate to this one. Just precious in the unique form.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the 3-6-9 poetry contest.
Sal Xoxo's
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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12? That's interesting Sally. Thanks so very much for reviewing!
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Met him, not fall in love with him. But we were young when we fell in love. Blessings, dear.
Sal :))
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Katiemae.
First let me say, your poem meets the style standard to a T. More so, the message is an innocent and endearing one. Every reader can fix his or her eyes upon this poem and smile. The last line of the last stanza is a great one.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
Hello Katiemae.
First let me say, your poem meets the style standard to a T. More so, the message is an innocent and endearing one. Every reader can fix his or her eyes upon this poem and smile. The last line of the last stanza is a great one.
Robert
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and revi!ew Robert
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was so cute. The picture is a good choice for the poem. I like the last line. It brings back.memories of my own first kiss. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was so cute. The picture is a good choice for the poem. I like the last line. It brings back.memories of my own first kiss. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much Brenda!
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is so cute and matches so well with the picture above it.
I love the way you capture that moment in time, the perfect first, that can never be repeated.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
This is so cute and matches so well with the picture above it.
I love the way you capture that moment in time, the perfect first, that can never be repeated.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much for reviewing!
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
I just love that last line!! A beautiful, heartfelt poem, with great use of the form's constraints. I find this particular form to be a bit difficult, but this was great.
Thank you for sharing!
Xo
Jess
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
I just love that last line!! A beautiful, heartfelt poem, with great use of the form's constraints. I find this particular form to be a bit difficult, but this was great.
Thank you for sharing!
Xo
Jess
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much Jessica for your lovely comments and review!
Comment from Jacob1395
I could really feel the love in this piece and the spark of energy between these two people. I thought you captured this really well in your writing. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
I could really feel the love in this piece and the spark of energy between these two people. I thought you captured this really well in your writing. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much Jacob for your review and good luck wishes!
Comment from Natureschild
This is a beautiful short poem, delivered in so few syllables. A perfect moment when a spark of energy makes the planets align for someone and everything seems perfect.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
This is a beautiful short poem, delivered in so few syllables. A perfect moment when a spark of energy makes the planets align for someone and everything seems perfect.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much for reviewing!