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The past is gone

A poem

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Comment from Begin Again
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What is done can't be changed because the past is what it is - the past. Instead we should greet each day with the promise of being the best we can possibly be and to be happy with what is given to us. Tomorrow can't b changed before we get there so enjoy each day as it comes.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thanks Carol for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from RodG
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Roy, I like how you remind us that time waits for no man and we must greet each day as a chance to learn something new. The Speaker also reminds us God is always with him in life and in the hereafter. Rod

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thanks Rod for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by RodG on 03-Nov-2024
    My pleasure.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I remember hearing an aunt tell me one time, "Don't borrow the joy from tomorrow. Spend the joy of the present while it's in your hands." Took me years to figure out what she meant, but once I did, I never forgot it. Beautiful poem, Roy. Gretchen

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thanks Gretchen for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
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Virtual six, my brother. I love it when you write of being made in your mother's womb. Why has the world forgotten that miracle and sacred place? I'm daily rejoicing in life and life in Christ. Those truths are holding me together at present. Thanks again.
Blessings to you always.
Sal xoxo

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 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thanks for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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We cannot return to the past, so why be anxious about those things that are gone. We have an eternal promise in Jesus Christ and here is where our eyes should lie, even so, let us focus on the day, meaning the current and present day, today. Nicely expressed.
RJ

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 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thanks RJ for these excellent comments and review, did you mean to give four stars? blessings Roy
reply by RJ Heritage on 03-Nov-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ