Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is such a heartwarming story. I love how this story turns into a reunion. The shift from "Hulk" to "Son" is wonderful. What a perfect story for the season. Lovely work!

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024

Thank you, Michael. I couldn't have the little goblins having all the fun. Mom deserved a treat too! What better than a wonderful homecoming. Have a wonderful November!
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

You captured the spirit of Halloween really well in this piece, Carol and I could picture the scene as I was reading really well. You did another brilliant job with this short piece, I enjoyed reading it.

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024

Thanks, Jacob! Wanted Mom to have a special treat for Halloween as well. It can't all be about the little goblins. It was a feel good moment. Have a wonderful November!
Smiles, Carol