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A very strange diet

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is great. I love how you use humor in it. I read this several times. The way you go from a body trapped in flesh to the consequences of extreme weight loss is great. The warning at the end brings everything together. It's a clever poem! Well done!

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
    Thank you, michael, we're happy you like it! I tried to make it a little bit fun and macabre at the same. I appreciate your thoughts and your awesome review and your great writing too! Thank you very much! Hope you have the best of days!