Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I can see why you and not e was mentioned in Rachael call to order in Atlantic City.
As for continuing to review your submissions it would be easier if you even read my schtick but it seems you have left the building with Kate Smith, so only this morning I was thinking what did I do to J.W. to not have him smile on my dribble.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

Alright, my friend. Would you like a flippant answer or brutal honesty. You choose.

reply by Tom Horonzy on 28-Oct-2024

Whatever. Flippant will be fine. Much of what I write is meant to be kibitzing or kiddingly
No I'll intent is ever intended
But I can understand if not everyone gets what I say or write
Apologies sent if needed
Tom H

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

It's a couple of things. I guess I would appreciate a little more effort on your part for a substantive review. It doesn't have to be a good review either. I never used to mind when you would give me the reviews that started with "Ho-hum."

As an example, when a person concludes a book that was posted over four months time, I like to give my impression of the story in the final review, and I usually put a fair amount of thought and time into an honest review that points out both the things that I liked and, if any, the things I didn't. The latter, especially, helps us to improve as writers, even if we disagree with what's being said. At least it lets us know how a portion of the readership feels about the story.

By contrast, take a look at your final review of Duel with the Devil. I had no reply to that except a bit of nonsense.

Now, I have come to expect and enjoy a bit of nonsense from you and giving it back to you. You are a fun guy to communicate with, but there has to be more than just that for me.

Likewise, in your postings of late, many have been just too bizarre to comment on. I've been reading them, but just haven't been able to muster up a decent review. I will, however, review your latest posting in a little while.

reply by Tom Horonzy on 28-Oct-2024

Many thanks. I appreciate your viewpoints. That said I am not sufficiently advanced to critique anyone's creative work, save for a misspelling or missed punctuation.
Further, in trying to recall what 'I wrote' yesterday is sufficiently challenging for me, so to critique a book written over months is unimaginable.
Maybe I should simply read what is posted and leave no comment, but have hoping my review would help the author reach BEST OF status, or Well Received.
Be well, and prosper.

I do write eclectically. Maybe, there's a better site for my releases where others are not dreaming of publication and simply enjoy abstract thoughts.
Any suggestions?

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

A food fight -- too funny! The descriptions are vivid. Great idea to have a write-off poetry contest. I love the ending, with Rachelle singing in the elevator! (And yes, I remember that song!) Good chapter! Carol

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

Thanks so much, Carol. This was so much fun to be able to participate in this rollicking good story. I'm glad I could add my part.

reply by Carol Clark2 on 28-Oct-2024

I'm sure it was great fun. Thanks for taking part. Carol

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You did a wonderful job writing this. I enjoyed how you continued their story. I've been trying to come up with something to write, but not a thing has come to mind. I'm truly impressed.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

Thanks so much, Barbara. I had a lot of fun with this and was very pleased to be able to contribute to this marvelous story.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Darn it, Jim!
Out of sixes!
My apologies!
But what a hoot! You clearly had a most enjoyable time penning your version, and what a version it is!
Absolutely creative and delightful!
I see "winner" all over your version!
Kudos!

fondly,
diane


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 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024

Thanks so much, diane. This whole story and all of the additions by folks are a real hoot. It was such fun to be able to participate in it.

reply by Mrs. KT on 28-Oct-2024

I agree, Jim!
Your version contains so much energy and creativity.
I nearly bowed out as I have jury duty - or supposedly I do - this week. Will find out later today.
In the meantime, I am scurrying around trying to run all the errands I need to run and prepare for Halloween festivities with our two little grandsons!
Not a dull moment anywhere!

fondly,
diane