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Comment from BethShelby
This lady must have been spoiled from the time she entered the world. It seems impossible for her to get the message no one is impressed with her. You've created a very unlikable character. I'm glad she is fiction, but she has some sisters who aren't
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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This lady must have been spoiled from the time she entered the world. It seems impossible for her to get the message no one is impressed with her. You've created a very unlikable character. I'm glad she is fiction, but she has some sisters who aren't
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Ohhh, that she DEFINITELY does!!
Every reviewer has despised this character! Gretchen and I have been delighted about that.
Thanks for your lovely review!!
xoxox
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah!
Rachelle!
What a heartwarming exchange between you and Rebekah, and what a hoot between you and Jane. Poor Jane... not!
I've come close to knowing a few "Jane's" in my life, but nowhere as obnoxious as your Jane.
And I laughed aloud at the reference to your "7 mutes." Sigh... I only am muted by 2 = always have to outdo me! :) :) :)
Much enjoyed!
Lots of emotion = highs and lows in one chapter!
Onward!
diane
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Hah!
Rachelle!
What a heartwarming exchange between you and Rebekah, and what a hoot between you and Jane. Poor Jane... not!
I've come close to knowing a few "Jane's" in my life, but nowhere as obnoxious as your Jane.
And I laughed aloud at the reference to your "7 mutes." Sigh... I only am muted by 2 = always have to outdo me! :) :) :)
Much enjoyed!
Lots of emotion = highs and lows in one chapter!
Onward!
diane
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I think I should teach a master class: How to Be Muted on FS, as I seem to have it down to a science!!
Thank you for your very nice review; you have the nicest way of making me feel like this story is keeping on track. I appreciate that.
xoxoxo
Comment from Begin Again
Will Tova foot the bill for the limo driver, or has Jane been holding out on the girls? This is a very good chapter, and it seems accurate that they finally snap. I would have done it long ago. Thank you for sharing, and Good Riddance, Jane. Happy Travels!
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Will Tova foot the bill for the limo driver, or has Jane been holding out on the girls? This is a very good chapter, and it seems accurate that they finally snap. I would have done it long ago. Thank you for sharing, and Good Riddance, Jane. Happy Travels!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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We just couldn't with shy and wonderful-in-all-her-Amishness Rebekah. She really had to be spared the ugliness.
Thanks for the nice review, Carol. Very much appreciated. xoxox