Love God with all your heart.
A poem.25 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so heartfelt! I love how you share the idea that true wisdom isn't just about knowledge but about trusting in God's plan. The imagery of God's gifts being planted within us before birth is so powerful.
Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Your poem is so heartfelt! I love how you share the idea that true wisdom isn't just about knowledge but about trusting in God's plan. The imagery of God's gifts being planted within us before birth is so powerful.
Beautifully done!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thanks Michael, for these sage comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Claire Tennant
As usual, Roy, your work teaches, encourages, and shows your faith; most likely built on difficult times and successes by God's grace. It comforts and consoles. My only concern is your second-last verse Did you want "If your heart was so pure.om"? It spoils the rhyme. Having said that It is a work of faith and deserves recognition, Good Luck and God Bless you.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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As usual, Roy, your work teaches, encourages, and shows your faith; most likely built on difficult times and successes by God's grace. It comforts and consoles. My only concern is your second-last verse Did you want "If your heart was so pure.om"? It spoils the rhyme. Having said that It is a work of faith and deserves recognition, Good Luck and God Bless you.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thanks Claire, for these sage comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome Roy
Comment from Samantha Wymer
I love this poem Roy. I do love the Lord with all my heart and soul. He has been me through somd difficult times in my life but he always brought me back. Beautiful poem.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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I love this poem Roy. I do love the Lord with all my heart and soul. He has been me through somd difficult times in my life but he always brought me back. Beautiful poem.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thanks Sam, for these sage comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Having grown up in the country. And being just an old hillbilly, we had a way of measuring whether people were who, and what, they said they were. When we would wonder about someone, We would say, "He might be talkin' the talk, but he ain't walkin' the walk."
God operates by the same principle. He hears our words. But he watches our actions. And that is our measure. God is not fooled.
Robert.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Having grown up in the country. And being just an old hillbilly, we had a way of measuring whether people were who, and what, they said they were. When we would wonder about someone, We would say, "He might be talkin' the talk, but he ain't walkin' the walk."
God operates by the same principle. He hears our words. But he watches our actions. And that is our measure. God is not fooled.
Robert.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thanks Robert, for these sage comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome.
Comment from DonandVicki
I look forward to reading your posts, I look to the faith that your present in your work The stanza that I enjoyed the most was the last: "God's planted things inside of us before we were a child."
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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I look forward to reading your posts, I look to the faith that your present in your work The stanza that I enjoyed the most was the last: "God's planted things inside of us before we were a child."
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thanks D&V for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy