Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a wonderful haiku and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is red and loud that you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

Thank you very much .

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem, life supplies music from nature. Using reeds to bring this out is very creative. It makes me laugh when people say they have no money for a show, life is a show, and it's free.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

Thank you very much

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading and can almost hear those flute reeds being played. I enjoyed reading and the entire presentation.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

Thank you very much .

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

This is just great.I have written two new ones. I am tring to write more short stories. I guess I should start polishing my Halloween stories. Very good Haiku. Enloy your weekend. Karen

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

thank you very much ,Karen.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This had the ease of flow that set a mood. I could hear the rustling of the reeds and grasses as the gentle wind blew. Moving them and playing them. This was beautifully written. It deserves a six but I'm out. Gretchen

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

Thank you very much.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Santha,
This is simple and religious haiku that matches the theme well. It also reminds us of all the beauty of nature.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

Thank you very much .

reply by dragonpoet on 23-Sep-2024

You are most kindly welcome, Santha.
Joan
PS I just published a book called The Interloper(and other stories in prose and poetry) It is now available on Amazon.com in both paperback and e-book format.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-Your note about the reeds is appreciated.
-A well written poem with effective nature imagery
describing the reeds as they sway.
-You do a good job showing their purpose
of "safekeeping divine music."
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

Thank you very much.

reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Sep-2024

You are very welcome.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Exceptional

I am not a fan of haikus. It akes more effort to write a review it seems than the inspired work. Still, fans of this form of poetry must be grateful for your continued effort of spearheading the club.
This one actually makes sense, thus the added star.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

You are so right .It is difficult to write a review for haikus .Thanks a lot once again for the lovely stars .

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I heard the rustling and nature's music in this ambient poem, those gentle swaying reeds protect, create melodies and hide a multitude of secrets, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

thank you very much ,Dolly for stoppingby.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I love that the reeds are keeping safe the melody of the marshes in this. A lovely haiku presentation for this challenge. I enjoyed it, well done.
Cheers

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024

Thank you very much ..