Prince Charming
A story of never-ending love24 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh my. What a beautiful love story. Not the fairy tale kind but the kind that truly does last a life time through the good and the bad, youth and old age. You write such lovely stories!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Oh my. What a beautiful love story. Not the fairy tale kind but the kind that truly does last a life time through the good and the bad, youth and old age. You write such lovely stories!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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thank you, Marilyn. Today is my great granddaughter's birthday and she likes my stories so I had to write one for her. Her name is Camryn.I appreciate your review and all yur kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AHHHHH!!! This is so beautiful and so romantic. I enjoyed reading. I happen to be a sucker for romance. In case you didn't know. LOl I saw a few places that you needed a comma instead of a period before dialogue. Keep an eye on it.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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AHHHHH!!! This is so beautiful and so romantic. I enjoyed reading. I happen to be a sucker for romance. In case you didn't know. LOl I saw a few places that you needed a comma instead of a period before dialogue. Keep an eye on it.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Darn! I checked and rechecked but of course I was using my editor who knows nothing. I'll give it a check again. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a beautifully tender story! Your writing captures the love so perfectly. The way Maggie reflects on her memories and shares them with her granddaughters is heartwarming. The dialogue with her granddaughters is so perfect and it brings the scene to life.
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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What a beautifully tender story! Your writing captures the love so perfectly. The way Maggie reflects on her memories and shares them with her granddaughters is heartwarming. The dialogue with her granddaughters is so perfect and it brings the scene to life.
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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thank you, Michael. Today is my great granddaughter's birthday and she asked me to write a story. I hope she enjoys it, because sooner than I like she won't care to hear stories with Prince Charming..... she'll want her own. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very sweet story about Prince Charming. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Love and blessings, teri
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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This is a very nice and very sweet story about Prince Charming. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Love and blessings, teri
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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thanks, Teri! Today is my great granddaughter's birthday (Camryn) and she asked that I write a story. I hope she enjoys it. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
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I hope she is really happy with the story you have written. I enjoyed it a lot. I wish Camryn a very happy birthday! love and blessings, Teri