Body of a Horse, Heart of a Man
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Curse of Zeus"A modern twist on Greek Mythology.
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Comment from way2gokevs
The young have no understanding in the power of speech and stories that can be manipulated by the gods in your story, which was a great read and write, enjoyed how love can be manipulated with twist and turns which lead to no winners. thanks for the read. Kevin
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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The young have no understanding in the power of speech and stories that can be manipulated by the gods in your story, which was a great read and write, enjoyed how love can be manipulated with twist and turns which lead to no winners. thanks for the read. Kevin
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Hi Kevin,
Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you got the point of this chapter. Kids will complain sometimes and then the repercussions of their whining has long range effects!!
Thanks so much,
Rhonda