Autumn Slumber
Loop Poetry27 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This was a most excellent loop poem to read before going to bed tonight. I liked reading it.
Favorite lines: mist muffles all the natural sounds
and also:
tunes that weave a web of sleep
Gotta love that 'm' alliteration and 'w' alliteration going on there.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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This was a most excellent loop poem to read before going to bed tonight. I liked reading it.
Favorite lines: mist muffles all the natural sounds
and also:
tunes that weave a web of sleep
Gotta love that 'm' alliteration and 'w' alliteration going on there.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much! I'm delighted you liked it! It was fun to set the autumn mood with this one :).
Melissa
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is a nice loop.poem. love the picture of Autumn. It goes nicely with your words. Very well written. Good luck in the contest. I like tge words: sounds of gentle patterning.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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This is a nice loop.poem. love the picture of Autumn. It goes nicely with your words. Very well written. Good luck in the contest. I like tge words: sounds of gentle patterning.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Brenda!!
Melissa
Comment from Carol Clark2
Nice job on this loop poem for the contest. You used great alliteration, in addition to all the rules of the loop format. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Nice job on this loop poem for the contest. You used great alliteration, in addition to all the rules of the loop format. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Hello there Carol. Thank you so much!
Melissa
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I enjoyed your descriptive words. I hope you're doing well. Enjoy your weekend.
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Hello there Carol. Thank you so much!
Melissa
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Loop poetry contest. I feel like I just took a late afternoon slumber on a rainy Fall day. Perfection. Well-done loop poem that reads smoothly and makes perfect sense, which sometimes isn't easy in this format. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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An excellent entry for the Loop poetry contest. I feel like I just took a late afternoon slumber on a rainy Fall day. Perfection. Well-done loop poem that reads smoothly and makes perfect sense, which sometimes isn't easy in this format. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you Marilyn!! I am looking forward to those cozy fall evenings that will be here shortly. Hugs!
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Thank you Marilyn!! I am looking forward to those cozy fall evenings that will be here shortly. Hugs!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Melissa, Great loop format and your poem has great alliteration throughout. Of special note:
rain plays a muted melody
melody of slow, haunting tunes
(When it rains, those autumn nights can be quite spooky. I don't know why, but that is something that I have always noticed.)
Good imagery. Wonderful photo. I wish that I was in it. Well done. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Hello Melissa, Great loop format and your poem has great alliteration throughout. Of special note:
rain plays a muted melody
melody of slow, haunting tunes
(When it rains, those autumn nights can be quite spooky. I don't know why, but that is something that I have always noticed.)
Good imagery. Wonderful photo. I wish that I was in it. Well done. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Hi Margaret. Thanks bunches, my friend. I am looking forward to those rainy, autumn nights... but, here in Virginia, we are still having summer. I have to keep reminding myself that is just September 6th. LOL. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
Just beautiful, Melissa!
And how your words resonate with me on this very chilly, rainy evening!
I am sitting in front of a cheerful fire in our family room! Goodness!
But what a lovely place to read and enjoy your lovely poem!
Best Wishes!
fondly,
diane
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Just beautiful, Melissa!
And how your words resonate with me on this very chilly, rainy evening!
I am sitting in front of a cheerful fire in our family room! Goodness!
But what a lovely place to read and enjoy your lovely poem!
Best Wishes!
fondly,
diane
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Hello Diane. Thanks so much!! It is a bit chilly here, but no rain... I was imaging that part ~ LOL. I am using a trick of Dean Kuch's tonight... inspiration has been fleeting of late, so I have lit candles in a dark room and I'm listening to a piano instrumental named "Autumn Colors". It's on in the background ~ hey, at least I got a Loop Poem out of it :). Thank you sweet friend.
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely loop poem with all the right elements of looping words even across the stanzas. You met the rhyme scheme requirement well and made us feel that coziness that comes with the cooler autumn weather which is more conducive to sleep that hot summer nights. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Lovely loop poem with all the right elements of looping words even across the stanzas. You met the rhyme scheme requirement well and made us feel that coziness that comes with the cooler autumn weather which is more conducive to sleep that hot summer nights. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Hello Helen. Thanks so much. I am experiencing such a night at this time. I also am playing a song list on my Spotify account that is Autumn Colors. I love it and if you like, I can send you the link. So cozy. I am writing tonight and I've borrowed a trick from Dean Kuch... he would light candles in a dark room and commence writing. Well... at least I got a Loop verse out if it LOL!!! Hugs, sweet friend.
Melissa
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That's great! Thank you for sharing Dean's tip! I don't use Spotify. It's good to know about it. 💖