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haiku (jauntily flaunting)

Nature's wardrobe

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Comment from Begin Again
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Good one, Wendy! I love how the folage changes into so many different brilliant colors in the fall, then the white winter and budding green in spring. ..... like changing clothes. Loved it!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
    Thank you Carol. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one. A lovely review.
    Wendy
Comment from patcelaw
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A very nice haiku for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. Your work is absolutely beautiful. I love the tree. I wish you the very best for the month. Patricia.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much Patricia for this lovely review and for the good wishes.
    Wendy
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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"jauntily flaunting" - try saying that 10 times as fast as you can, lol!

I love how you tie nature to human life by giving the seasons different outfits. Very clever. Hopefully, the committee thinks so too:-)

Good luck.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
    Lol. Yes, that would be aa tongue-twister, for sure. Thanks so much for a lovely review, and also for the good wishes. I am pleased you like it!
    Wendy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I always find the colours of autumn the most vibrant of the year, and love tramping through the fallen leaves. From this excellent Haiku it would seem you do too. lovely tree. kay

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
    Yes I do too, but I only rarely get the chance unless I travel to the colder areas of Australia. I love the Autumn colours in other areas. Mostly the majority of trees where I live are not deciduous. Thanks so much for reviewing.
    Wendy
    Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is what we are seeing in the park right now Wendy, the dress code is becoming more formal until it will be stark black tie! I enjoyed your magical post, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
    Thanks so much Dolly. We're into spring clothes now! I'm glad you liked this one.
    Wendy
Comment from royowen
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I love language available to us describing the colours of autumn, she displays her autumnal clothing with her prideful adornments, yes it's a wonderful time of the year, but not here, beautifully written Wendy, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much Roy, for this splendid review. Moving into spring is beautiful too.
    Wendy