Comment from
Jesse James Doty
This is a lovely sentiment of a sleigh ride for two. I love the script style of print and it is easy to read since it is large and easy on the eyes. The romantic tone set by the choice of words works well and gives a feel of a snowy day with sleigh bells ringing and lovers snuggling close together. I'm so sorry the love of your life is no longer here to share this romantic ride.
This is a feel-good poem with a surprise ending.
Jesse
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
Jesse, I appreciate your review and kind words. Glad you liked this one. Willie
reply by Jesse James Doty on 26-Aug-2024
You're welcome, Willie.
Jesse