If flowers could dance
What a sight.36 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do wish flowers could dance, yes, the beautiful colors and shapes, along with the fragrance. It would be a sight to behold. Thank you for giving me that image in my mind.
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I do wish flowers could dance, yes, the beautiful colors and shapes, along with the fragrance. It would be a sight to behold. Thank you for giving me that image in my mind.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww what a lovely thought! Not only would we enjoy their delightful dancing and exuberance but also their beauty and fragrance wafting through the house. Your sweet verse changes from 'us' to 'me' infusing a note of poignancy at the end. Thank you for sharing, Willie. Great pic too. Take care Debbie
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Aww what a lovely thought! Not only would we enjoy their delightful dancing and exuberance but also their beauty and fragrance wafting through the house. Your sweet verse changes from 'us' to 'me' infusing a note of poignancy at the end. Thank you for sharing, Willie. Great pic too. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Willie,
This poem is wistful and uses repetition well to extend the theme. It would be great to see flowers dance. Though this could be a metaphor for fancy dressed women on a dance floor with their perfume wafting through the air.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
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Hi Willie,
This poem is wistful and uses repetition well to extend the theme. It would be great to see flowers dance. Though this could be a metaphor for fancy dressed women on a dance floor with their perfume wafting through the air.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I enjoyed this light-hearted, joyful poem. The idea of flowers dancing and spreading their colors and fragrance is a happy one. A very good flow to your words throughout. Thanks for sharing.
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I enjoyed this light-hearted, joyful poem. The idea of flowers dancing and spreading their colors and fragrance is a happy one. A very good flow to your words throughout. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Ulla
Yes, Willie, what a joy that would be. But your poem and your words do project such joy and positivity all their own. I loved this poem so full of laughter. Something we sorely need. Ulla:)))
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Yes, Willie, what a joy that would be. But your poem and your words do project such joy and positivity all their own. I loved this poem so full of laughter. Something we sorely need. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was an awesome little feel good poem. I felt a rhythm to it immediately and it remained in that rhythm throughout, which is a difficult thing to do sometimes. I don't know if you meant it to be this way or not, but I absolutely loved how your name "Willie P." rhymed with the last line. You could actually drop the date down and make your name part of the poem. I also loved the font, although I bet some people won't. The artwork was cute, as well. All in all, a wonderful, wonderful job!
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This was an awesome little feel good poem. I felt a rhythm to it immediately and it remained in that rhythm throughout, which is a difficult thing to do sometimes. I don't know if you meant it to be this way or not, but I absolutely loved how your name "Willie P." rhymed with the last line. You could actually drop the date down and make your name part of the poem. I also loved the font, although I bet some people won't. The artwork was cute, as well. All in all, a wonderful, wonderful job!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Your poem instantly reminded me of a field of wildflowers swaying gently in the wind. What a beautiful sight as their colorful heads bobbed in the breeze. Lovely!
Smiles, Carol
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Your poem instantly reminded me of a field of wildflowers swaying gently in the wind. What a beautiful sight as their colorful heads bobbed in the breeze. Lovely!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, If Flowers Could Dance, presents a world of beauty that becomes animated and joyous as the dancing of wonderous flowers circle and shift in this world of happiness.
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This poem, If Flowers Could Dance, presents a world of beauty that becomes animated and joyous as the dancing of wonderous flowers circle and shift in this world of happiness.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Nice one. Love the image and the writing style. Good rhyming and like the concept. Flowers dancing, which they sometimes do. Thanks for sharing.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Nice one. Love the image and the writing style. Good rhyming and like the concept. Flowers dancing, which they sometimes do. Thanks for sharing.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is such a lovely poem! Thank you for the mental images it creates. Flowers do dance, but they're so limited by those stems that get in the way :-) It looks like you also did the artwork! You're certainly multi-talented.
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This is such a lovely poem! Thank you for the mental images it creates. Flowers do dance, but they're so limited by those stems that get in the way :-) It looks like you also did the artwork! You're certainly multi-talented.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
