Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Patch and Ruby Fix Helen's Mews "Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Debi, I had to smile when I read this poem about Helen's lack of a muse. But in steps two cats and bingo the mews, well muse, is no longer a problem. Loved it! Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi Debi, I had to smile when I read this poem about Helen's lack of a muse. But in steps two cats and bingo the mews, well muse, is no longer a problem. Loved it! Ulla xcx
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi Ulla, I know this is really silly but I felt silly today. Haha. I love that you seemed to get everything I was trying to get across. Actually I was hoping others would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was just so very cute. It is adorable how the cats were depicted more as people and had to fix the human. I think my cat and dog have had some similar conversations lately, as I feel like my "mews" aka "muse" aka "mind" is breaking. Anyway, great work on this poem!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This was just so very cute. It is adorable how the cats were depicted more as people and had to fix the human. I think my cat and dog have had some similar conversations lately, as I feel like my "mews" aka "muse" aka "mind" is breaking. Anyway, great work on this poem!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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LOL, hi Monica, I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Ric Myworld
All the kitties rule the world. Both of mine passed on over the last year at 14 and 15-years-old. I had decided I was too old to have another. But when an older person with a 12-year-old Siamese cat that wasn't allowed in the care facility he was forced to move into, I inherited another cat. LOl. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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All the kitties rule the world. Both of mine passed on over the last year at 14 and 15-years-old. I had decided I was too old to have another. But when an older person with a 12-year-old Siamese cat that wasn't allowed in the care facility he was forced to move into, I inherited another cat. LOl. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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You seem like a cat guy, Ric. And now I know for sure you are.
I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
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I guess I'm a cat and a dog guy, and of course a horse guy; so, I supposed I'm just an all-around animal guy. LOL. It's always fun, Debi!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
My Goodness, you've had fun here, Debi, by creating this lovely little story about Patch and Ruby helping Helen out with her broken muse and then getting themselves in quite a kerfuffle before sorting out the quandary with some much needed Meow Mix (I think I've entered a parallel universe!). No seriously, this is cleverly done with excellent double entendre, personification and lots of a-muse-ment:)) Well done! Take care Debbie xo
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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My Goodness, you've had fun here, Debi, by creating this lovely little story about Patch and Ruby helping Helen out with her broken muse and then getting themselves in quite a kerfuffle before sorting out the quandary with some much needed Meow Mix (I think I've entered a parallel universe!). No seriously, this is cleverly done with excellent double entendre, personification and lots of a-muse-ment:)) Well done! Take care Debbie xo
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi Debbie, I was thinking about you a lot today. A week later and still feeling pretty lousy so ended up in bed today for about five hours. So I decided not to review you as I am in such a mood and I guess it is better I don't review anyone when I am like that.
I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
See you tomorrow.
Comment from Sally Law
Debi dear,
This is adorable! Cats are purrtty smart and when you put together Patch and Ruby, you have a dynamic duo. Two cat brains are better than one, always. I especially like Helen's Meow Mix. Who wouldn't benefit from a little bit of tnat?
Sending you my best today as always, and a furry hello from Catzilla too. ;))
Love & Blessings across the universe!
Sally & Catzilla XOs
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Debi dear,
This is adorable! Cats are purrtty smart and when you put together Patch and Ruby, you have a dynamic duo. Two cat brains are better than one, always. I especially like Helen's Meow Mix. Who wouldn't benefit from a little bit of tnat?
Sending you my best today as always, and a furry hello from Catzilla too. ;))
Love & Blessings across the universe!
Sally & Catzilla XOs
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi Sally, I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Also thanks for the fun six stars, sweetie.
Comment from patcelaw
This is absolutely very delightful. Poor and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It moves along very well and it is funny in spots so so much enjoyed it. Patricia.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This is absolutely very delightful. Poor and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It moves along very well and it is funny in spots so so much enjoyed it. Patricia.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi Patricia, I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from GWHARGIS
Surprised they didn't offer up any catnip. I've seen the effects of that stuff. Lol. I think your poem was fun and childlike. That was a compliment. I love a good children's poem. Especially if it's written for adults. Very fun and great visuals. Gretchen
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Surprised they didn't offer up any catnip. I've seen the effects of that stuff. Lol. I think your poem was fun and childlike. That was a compliment. I love a good children's poem. Especially if it's written for adults. Very fun and great visuals. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Haha, Gretchen, I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Begin Again
Brilliant and made me laugh for sure. How adorable! What a wonderful tribute and helpful ploy to put a smile on Helen's face and find her muse.... though Meow Mix might better please the kittens. But then, maybe they knew that!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Brilliant and made me laugh for sure. How adorable! What a wonderful tribute and helpful ploy to put a smile on Helen's face and find her muse.... though Meow Mix might better please the kittens. But then, maybe they knew that!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi Carol, I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Patch and Ruby Fix Helen's Muse, presented with six AABB-rhymed quatrains, makes a creative approach for Helen's cats to explore the internet and fetch a repair kit of Meow Mix to fix poor Helen's "meows". So funny (and just like those cats).
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This poem, Patch and Ruby Fix Helen's Muse, presented with six AABB-rhymed quatrains, makes a creative approach for Helen's cats to explore the internet and fetch a repair kit of Meow Mix to fix poor Helen's "meows". So funny (and just like those cats).
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Haha, hi Bill, I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
My first question: Did you actually order Meow Mix and send it to Helen? That sounds like something you'd do, lol! And certainly that will benefit Patch:-)
A fun, rhyming poem to life Helen's spirit. I didn't realize her muse was an issue, as I feel like I've seen several posts from her in the last month.
I'm glad you're having fun with your Patch and Ruby stories. The cats in the picture are adorable.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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My first question: Did you actually order Meow Mix and send it to Helen? That sounds like something you'd do, lol! And certainly that will benefit Patch:-)
A fun, rhyming poem to life Helen's spirit. I didn't realize her muse was an issue, as I feel like I've seen several posts from her in the last month.
I'm glad you're having fun with your Patch and Ruby stories. The cats in the picture are adorable.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Haha, Pam, you are so funny. Yes, of course I sent Helen Meow mix for her fiction story about an imaginary muse problem. Even if it had been true it said that Helen teased about her muse. Haha. But I know you are joking around too. You are so cute.
I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi