Comment from royowen

Excellent

I see Eleanor is npback in the picture, and you've realised that working with ghosts in writing such a good idea that you are loving it, as I am, with the short tempered Matthew Donatelli in two, this is going to be great, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024

Yes, writing with the ghosts and spirits has lightened my heart and I am certainly enjoying it. I'm thrilled that your are too. So we are off on another adventure but I think I will slow down a bit on how fast I write.... I say think because I never know when my brain takes off and write write write. LOL
Smiles, Carol

reply by royowen on 30-Jul-2024

Good job carol,

reply by royowen on 30-Jul-2024

Yes, slow down have a rest.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

Interesting continuation . Your dialogue is very smooth and natural, that is one area that I have trouble in. The characters are becoming recognizable to me. Nicely done.

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 Comment Written 29-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024

thanks, Marilyn. Danny is a new ghost and I want her to come off as saucy to Donatelli. They have worked together and he often gets a chip on his shoulder when she solves a clue before he does. Do you think their chemistry comes off okay
Appreciate your thoughts.
Smiles, Carol

reply by Marilyn Hamilton on 29-Jul-2024

so far it seems good. enjoying it