Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

If this is the best we can select for the Commander in Chief we have slipped
Off the slippery slope and into the sewer.
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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024

HI Tom,
Thanks for the review. I agree.
Joan

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I've said it before, with the gigantic population of the US you'd think you'd be able to conjure up more impressive candidates than Biden and Trump, this is beautifully written Joan, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024

Thanks, Roy, for the review. I agree.
Joan

reply by royowen on 22-Jul-2024

Well done

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I agree that neither candidate should be president. But I am hoping for two new capable leaders to be nominated. Great job with your Andaree poem. I didn't know what you meant by "chi" which means "spirit". Perhaps you meant "Zen"?

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024

Hi Helen,
Thanks for the nice review. I think a lot of America feels the same.
I chi can mean Zen. But then Zen wouldn't fit the rhyme scheme.
Joan