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The problem of creating a non-addictive painkiller

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Comment from Tom Horonzy
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and the tension hung like icicles from the roof eaves at 30 degrees Fahrenheit or 1.1111111111 Celsius. Remember, I was in Navy weather for ten years. It comes naturally. The story ends well with high expectations for chapter 18

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 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Tom. Yeah, I think Julia will have a little easier time meeting Fran at Brian's house.