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Michael Ludwinder
haha. This is so funny. If only this contest was for seven lines instead of six. I love how you write it. The rhyme scheme gives it a light hearted feel which goes perfectly with your message. And it's good to know that seven lines can change the world!
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
I guess I could combine the six-line poem with the one-line poem and see what happens.