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Cellphone Troubles

Poem appropriate for middle school.

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Comment from Begin Again
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I doubt you would find a teenager nowadays that will agree with you,Beth. My grandchildren always have their noses buried in the phone or IPad. I think its way too much but it's the way things have changed. I liked the outdoors.
Smile. Carol

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you Carol, It is really the kind of poem a kid would like but time is running out and it was all I could come up with. I still don't like cell phones but my kids an grandchildren can't imagine life without them.
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A poem appropriate for middle school and some older people (raises hand slightly). It's an awful addictive habit and I am so glad I didn't have it when I was a kid. This is a good entry for the Poem for a Child contest. Good luck.

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
    Thank you Marilyn. Yes, adults have this problem as well. I think kids ten to get cell phone when they are too young but since pay phone aren't around any more I guess young people need them for safety reasons.
    Beth