Tall Hatted Woman
oh my what an interlude34 total reviews
Comment from Steve Foreman
This was off the wall! From where on earth did you come up with this idea? It is evocative and funny and well written. I really enjoyed its quirkiness!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This was off the wall! From where on earth did you come up with this idea? It is evocative and funny and well written. I really enjoyed its quirkiness!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you most sincerely. The image of a tall hatted woman just came to me out of nowhere, and I could not get it out of my head.
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You are welcome!
Comment from Janet Foor
Ahhh. When opportunity knocks - what is a gentleman to do?
This is a delightful read Doug. Different, fun and engaging.
I loved the last line written with humor and panache.
Naughty and nice at the same time.
Blessings my friend
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Ahhh. When opportunity knocks - what is a gentleman to do?
This is a delightful read Doug. Different, fun and engaging.
I loved the last line written with humor and panache.
Naughty and nice at the same time.
Blessings my friend
Janet
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Oh my, you are too good to me. But I love it. Thanks loads. This image of a tall hatted woman just came to me. From nowhere. Never ever thought of such an image. Kinda chuckled to myself at the image that would not leave me alone. So?I wrote about it. Now, I can sleep again. Sort of. Lol
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well now, this is a departure from your usual, I dare say, and most enjoyable! That's not to say I don't enjoy whatever you write, but please sir, may I have more?
Delightful!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Well now, this is a departure from your usual, I dare say, and most enjoyable! That's not to say I don't enjoy whatever you write, but please sir, may I have more?
Delightful!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Tee hee, oh you charmer. I have to be careful, or I?ll have to get off my horse once more.
Lol
Thanks so much,
Doug
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LOL! Better stay mounted -- it's a long way to Toronto. :)))
Comment from Begin Again
Now you've put your little rendezvous in print for all to see and described the lady's discretion quite well -- does that make you a gentleman? Now, who am I to judge? You were kind to pleasure the lady's desires, and she left happy... A gentleman in my book!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Now you've put your little rendezvous in print for all to see and described the lady's discretion quite well -- does that make you a gentleman? Now, who am I to judge? You were kind to pleasure the lady's desires, and she left happy... A gentleman in my book!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks,
Doug
Comment from QC Poet
What indeed atarted coin and ended with a hat but it was a novel way for her to rob those who fell for her trao Good laugh in a weird way seem to have been translated probably sounds funnier in another language. Thanks for Sharing your poetry with us
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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What indeed atarted coin and ended with a hat but it was a novel way for her to rob those who fell for her trao Good laugh in a weird way seem to have been translated probably sounds funnier in another language. Thanks for Sharing your poetry with us
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from teafor2
A sultry, quasi-salty, alluring, succinct penned enthralling tryst/escapade which kept this reader glued to it free flowing format...I was sorry for the
end. Well done and welcomed respite from the somber/sober FS reads.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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A sultry, quasi-salty, alluring, succinct penned enthralling tryst/escapade which kept this reader glued to it free flowing format...I was sorry for the
end. Well done and welcomed respite from the somber/sober FS reads.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Smiling, thank you. I was sorry my fantasy stopped also, but perhaps I was too timid to continue. lol
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You are welcome:-)
Comment from F. William Lester
A gentleman you are. If this is a true story, it's a good one. I'm a neophyte in poetry, what would you call this poem? Free rhyme? Poetic prose? I like the story and the way you presented it, but I'm a bit lost in the style. Thanks for sharing it. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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A gentleman you are. If this is a true story, it's a good one. I'm a neophyte in poetry, what would you call this poem? Free rhyme? Poetic prose? I like the story and the way you presented it, but I'm a bit lost in the style. Thanks for sharing it. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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It's simply free style. It's what I always write. It allows one to translate feelings, story, anything felt inside to something the readers may FEEL. This is also called "Gestalt". Too much analysis ruins the poem's effect. Welcome to poetry. You already did it right without knowing. Kind of confirming what I just eluciadated? Or confounded. lol
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Thanks for the explanation. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh, yes; you were TOTALLY a gentlemen!....well, except the "kissing and telling" part there, Victor!! But you were probably still so shocked by it all, that you couldn't help yourself. Is that what happened? Like, if this weren't your first rodeo, you'd have handled it with much more dignity and candor!
What a totally fun read this was! Thank you for this smile this evening.
xoxo
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Oh, yes; you were TOTALLY a gentlemen!....well, except the "kissing and telling" part there, Victor!! But you were probably still so shocked by it all, that you couldn't help yourself. Is that what happened? Like, if this weren't your first rodeo, you'd have handled it with much more dignity and candor!
What a totally fun read this was! Thank you for this smile this evening.
xoxo
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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I'm chuckling.
Thank you so much.
Doug
Comment from Aussie
You're getting worse in your old age! I loved it. Cheap thrill for a found coin, Doug. I liked it, it was different and yet I can't work out why the Tall Hat? Maybe when she gave it to him, it was in payment for pressing the flesh? Hee, Hee. K xx
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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You're getting worse in your old age! I loved it. Cheap thrill for a found coin, Doug. I liked it, it was different and yet I can't work out why the Tall Hat? Maybe when she gave it to him, it was in payment for pressing the flesh? Hee, Hee. K xx
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Ha ha. You?re a riot. This phrase "Tall Hatted Woman"
just came to me out of nowhere. My muse I suppose. I?ve had things come to me before, often.
But never like this. So demanding. Would not leave me alone. So I trotted to my pen and pad in an attempt to satisfy her. I hope I succeeded. Lol
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Oh, and thanks for the sixer. They seem harder to come by than before.
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Maybe she kept her knickers under the tall hat? 👀
Comment from Neonewman
Wow! What a wonderfully crafted piece, my friend. It is harder to find men who treat women like the good old days. I still do, and I feel they appreciate this.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Wow! What a wonderfully crafted piece, my friend. It is harder to find men who treat women like the good old days. I still do, and I feel they appreciate this.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Steve. I completely agree. But I was a bit naughty with this one. Still, it tickled me. As did your review.
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My pleasure, and there's nothing wrong with naughty, lol.