Dodie Rae
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The essence"A young woman unwilling to submit to abuse.
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Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Steve
This is quite the horror story. And, silly me thought she was just a nice quiet girl. Now, she has reverted back to that nice quiet girl. And, the police will never suspect her of Richard's death
It's possible that she used her slashing tools in previous chapters but, I did not come back to fan story until last month after a 4 1/2 year hiatus. So, if she did, I must've missed it because I missed the previous chapters
I thought this was a very well written chapter. But, I've come to expect that from you. I found no mistakes other than the one I was below.
Here did you mean book?
" When Dodie Rae becomes enraged, the contents of the b"
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Hi, Steve
This is quite the horror story. And, silly me thought she was just a nice quiet girl. Now, she has reverted back to that nice quiet girl. And, the police will never suspect her of Richard's death
It's possible that she used her slashing tools in previous chapters but, I did not come back to fan story until last month after a 4 1/2 year hiatus. So, if she did, I must've missed it because I missed the previous chapters
I thought this was a very well written chapter. But, I've come to expect that from you. I found no mistakes other than the one I was below.
Here did you mean book?
" When Dodie Rae becomes enraged, the contents of the b"
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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I shortened it, it is the contents of the bottle that was exposed. This is chapter three, and chapter one is called Dodie Rae; chapter two is Bay Lynn.
She was abused by her husband in first chapter,
She visited her grandmother, Bay Lynn, in Layfayette, Louisianna, who gave her a bottle with what she called her essence inside.
Thank you for this beautiful review, my friend and I am happy to see you back.
God bless,
Steve
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You?re welcome
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
YES!YES!YES! Oh joy! That bastard is dead finally lol And what a lovely, gruesome death it was. As you can tell, I had developed quite a hatred for that idiot, which is a tribute to your writing. Very nicely done. Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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YES!YES!YES! Oh joy! That bastard is dead finally lol And what a lovely, gruesome death it was. As you can tell, I had developed quite a hatred for that idiot, which is a tribute to your writing. Very nicely done. Enjoyed!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Oh what joy, this is my first exceptional review. I am dancing over here. I am thoroughly enjoying crafting this book the reviews are pushing me forward.
Thank you, Marilyn.
God bless,
Steve
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well-deserved!
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=)
