Life Cycle of A Tree
Choka poem30 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice choka about the life cycle of a tree. We seldom think about trees as living creatures. I have written a number of poems about trees including one where the trees turn against humanity green trees don't make it.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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nice choka about the life cycle of a tree. We seldom think about trees as living creatures. I have written a number of poems about trees including one where the trees turn against humanity green trees don't make it.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Than you for dropping by.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a lovely Choka poem done in correct format. I love the first line and then how the rest of the poem tells about the life of the tree and ends with its epitaph written in the ashes. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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This is a lovely Choka poem done in correct format. I love the first line and then how the rest of the poem tells about the life of the tree and ends with its epitaph written in the ashes. Nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem of a life cycle of a tree. One of my favorite children's books is 'The Giving Tree' by Shel Silverstein. When I'd read it to my class, I would always also share a few tears. I would warn the kids first. LOL Many of them joined me with tears. It's a beautiful story.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem of a life cycle of a tree. One of my favorite children's books is 'The Giving Tree' by Shel Silverstein. When I'd read it to my class, I would always also share a few tears. I would warn the kids first. LOL Many of them joined me with tears. It's a beautiful story.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing..
Comment from Nicki.B
This is my first time reading a choka poem I had to Google what that meant. It's very well written I really enjoyed it. It shows that the life of a tree gives us something special throughout its journey through life. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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This is my first time reading a choka poem I had to Google what that meant. It's very well written I really enjoyed it. It shows that the life of a tree gives us something special throughout its journey through life. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much..
Comment from GWHARGIS
This is just so sad. When I was little, I used to cry when I heard chainsaws. I knew trees were being destroyed. I love trees. Beautifully written in a unique way. Through the eyes of the tree. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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This is just so sad. When I was little, I used to cry when I heard chainsaws. I knew trees were being destroyed. I love trees. Beautifully written in a unique way. Through the eyes of the tree. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from patcelaw
Well written for the Japanese art form and I enjoyed listening to it very much may you have a pleasant day and a very good weekend. God bless youPatricia
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Well written for the Japanese art form and I enjoyed listening to it very much may you have a pleasant day and a very good weekend. God bless youPatricia
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much .
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an interesting poem presenting the life of tree's leaves as seasons come and go. It was effective and descriptive writing and I enjoyed reading this. The image matches well.
Best wishes
Alex
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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This is an interesting poem presenting the life of tree's leaves as seasons come and go. It was effective and descriptive writing and I enjoyed reading this. The image matches well.
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thanks a lot for stoppingby
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Lifecycle of a Tree, presented in couplets, follows the self-narrating tree through life and the afterlife as it sees the service it has given until finally returning to dust.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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This poem, Lifecycle of a Tree, presented in couplets, follows the self-narrating tree through life and the afterlife as it sees the service it has given until finally returning to dust.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from royowen
I think there people that still fell trees don't realise that there people who believe that trees have a soul which is destroyed when they are chopped down, scripture says that trees clap their hands in praise to God, but trees produce oxygen and consume carbon dioxide, turning it into oxygen, well done Santha, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I think there people that still fell trees don't realise that there people who believe that trees have a soul which is destroyed when they are chopped down, scripture says that trees clap their hands in praise to God, but trees produce oxygen and consume carbon dioxide, turning it into oxygen, well done Santha, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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yes . it is sad that trees are indiscriminately felled...Thank you Roy and bless you.
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That?s right
Comment from Tom Horonzy
and even then if properly disposed the ashes remaining will bear new growth, perhaps not from that which was but something new to bud, and sprout and reach for the sky with help.
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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and even then if properly disposed the ashes remaining will bear new growth, perhaps not from that which was but something new to bud, and sprout and reach for the sky with help.
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much,especially for getting what I left out ..Thanks for dropping by
